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I Am

Are you that girl or guy
Who can gaze at the sky a while and smile
At the cotton candy clouds dipped in sunset
Are you that friend who could join in 
As bullfrog green sings brown sonnets
Serenading his one and only true love
Are you that soul who stands real close to deliver hugs
So warm they melt the moon causing swooning spooning
Are you the one who laughs in the sun 
especially at yourself finding human err
Are you the peace I seek in my dreams will 
I wake to find you there a thrill?
If not I am and who are you?

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Mari Lehtmets Date: 10/3/2023 5:52:00 AM <3 Login to Reply Mari Lehtmets Date: 10/3/2023 5:59:00 AM it should be an expression of love; a heart Karen Jones Date: 10/3/2023 5:57:00 AM Mari thanks for reading. Not sure what that means. Hmmm

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/1/2021 12:11:00 PM This is such a sweet message, and I loved the creativity of this phrase: As bullfrog green sings brown sonnets Serenading his one and only true love Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 11/1/2021 2:38:00 PM Andrea thanks for liking.

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/26/2021 6:56:00 AM You express such lovely sentiments Karen. Enjoyed the read. Glad you are! Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/26/2021 7:32:00 AM Thanks Vijay!

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 10/26/2021 2:10:00 AM So pretty, peaceful and joyful! Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/26/2021 2:25:00 AM Aw thanks BJ!

Constance La France Date: 10/25/2021 2:21:00 PM Karen, wonderful, I really like your poem, great writing ~ love and serenity _Constance Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/25/2021 3:34:00 PM Aw thanks so much.

Richard Palmer Date: 10/25/2021 10:55:00 AM Yes I am, wonderful words, enjoyed your words Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/25/2021 11:33:00 AM Cool beans Richard. I am excited you are! Thanks for reading.

Panagiota Romios Date: 10/24/2021 11:31:00 PM I found this positive and thought provoking. Panagiota “Life is an adventure not a destination” My quote Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 11/1/2021 9:32:00 PM Thanks! Rico Leffanta Date: 10/31/2021 11:32:00 AM Of course life is an adventure! People who have lived in the same body for an hundred years are still surprised by what it can - or can not - do! Aloha! Karen Jones Date: 10/25/2021 12:03:00 AM I am glad you like it. Thanks Panagiota!

Shirley Hawkins Date: 10/24/2021 7:36:00 PM Lovely Karen. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/24/2021 7:39:00 PM Thank you for reading Shirley.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 10/24/2021 1:37:00 PM Lovely writing. God bless you. Love, Gina Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/24/2021 1:43:00 PM God bless you as well Karen Jones Date: 10/24/2021 1:42:00 PM Regina you are kind thanks!

Paul Callus Date: 10/24/2021 6:40:00 AM I am glad you find pleasure and peace of mind in the beauty of Nature and warm human relationship, Karen. It is a blessing to live and think positively. ~ Best regards // paul Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/24/2021 8:09:00 AM Yes it is a blessing. Thanks again Paul.

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 10/22/2021 12:28:00 PM Hello Karen, your poem is full of charming expressions and imagery. I love it. :) Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/22/2021 1:13:00 PM Thanks so much Evelyn

Harry Horsman Date: 10/22/2021 7:05:00 AM Hi Karen, i'm Harry, when a young man i could do all of those things, getting past it now, but still love poetry, especially this one. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/22/2021 8:18:00 AM lol in heat song is supposed to be heart song lol typos Karen Jones Date: 10/22/2021 8:03:00 AM Hi Harry! Glad you like it and as a poet (have read your work) you are especially made to the core to do those things and more if not in life in heat song, in poem which is just as nice, Hugs. Age is an honor even if there are challenges.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/22/2021 1:37:00 AM God created you as you are. If things are wrong then pray for guidance. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 10/22/2021 5:14:00 AM Amen. Do you find this poem to be negative for me it was just an affirmation not a sign of trouble. Thanks for reading them as I am still growing as a human as a poet.