Hidden

buried in dark soil grains rest in secret slumber - seeds dream of blossoms

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/24/2018 10:02:00 PM

Delightful haiku. Beautifully executed, Agnes.

FJ Thomas

Date: 7/15/2018 8:58:00 PM

This is a very creative haiku Agnes. After a while of reading many nature haiku they start to run together. But this is unique and beautiful.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 7/15/2018 9:02:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 4/30/2017 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/30/2017 8:25:00 AM

Thanks, Janis.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/29/2017 7:47:00 AM

Agnes, how beautifully you have imaged the gestation of spring! Congratulations on your win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2017 8:45:00 PM

Good to see you on his list, Agnes. I remember this one!! Congrats

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/28/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/28/2017 7:31:00 PM

Seeds dreaming! Congrats, Agnes!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/28/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thanks, Kim.

White Wolf

Date: 4/28/2017 6:41:00 PM

A beautiful haiku, Agnes, congrats to you

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/28/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thank you, White Wolf.

Joseph May

Date: 4/28/2017 2:25:00 PM

Very nice haiku Agnes...Congrats on your win

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/28/2017 11:19:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/20/2017 3:40:00 PM

Always a pleasure to be back reading a winning poem, Agnes...congratulations! Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 4/28/2017 11:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul.

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 2/18/2017 11:37:00 PM

Beautiful! Congrats!

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:03:00 PM

Thanks, sushma.

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/18/2017 11:16:00 PM

Congratulations on this win for the 'Hidden' blossoms ! ...

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:04:00 PM

Thanks, Probir.

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2017 1:27:00 PM

Agnes congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:05:00 PM

Thank you very much, I am so glad you liked my poem.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/18/2017 8:47:00 AM

Back to congratulate you Agnes, great going...

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:05:00 PM

Thanks, Charlie.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2017 3:30:00 AM

- Your haiku gives hope .... lovely written, Agnes - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:06:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/15/2017 12:09:00 AM

Wow! Amazing haiku, Agnes:)

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:06:00 PM

Thanks, Jo.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2017 5:21:00 PM

I see you did Hidden too. Love this, Agnes!

Paul Callus

Date: 2/14/2017 12:37:00 PM

A lovely take on the 'hidden' theme, Agnes. Spring is on the way, and soon we'll be enjoying those colourful blossoms. ~ Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/19/2017 5:07:00 PM

Thanks, Paul.

Chris Green

Date: 2/14/2017 6:30:00 AM

I love this Agnes, I love the thought of seeds dreaming of blossoms. So very nice.

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/14/2017 7:08:00 AM

Thank you, Chris.

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/13/2017 8:41:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Agnes...

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/14/2017 7:08:00 AM

Thanks, Charlie.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2017 6:51:00 PM

what lovely personification Agnes I love this time of year and the new life around us:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/14/2017 7:07:00 AM

Thanks, Jan. It has been unseasonally warm here this winter - last weekend it was 25 degrees Celsius! It felt like spring, and it is hard to believe that it could still get very cold.

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/13/2017 6:48:00 PM

Yes, the spring season approaches...and your haiku warms the soul...great write Agnes...god bless...^WW^

Agnes Krampe
Date: 2/14/2017 7:06:00 AM

Thank you for stopping by, ^WW^