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Feb. 6. 2025
A Valentine Senryu's Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

 

on valentine's day embrace with burning desire~ inch to ecstasy.

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Date: 2/12/2025 7:06:00 PM
Congrats, Valsa!
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Date: 2/10/2025 11:35:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "hey valentine" write again. Have a great day today and on Valentine's Day.........
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:02:00 PM
Way to go, Valsa. Congratulations
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:03:00 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your winning placement with your passionate senryu.
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Date: 2/9/2025 11:10:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Tania for the placement given.
Date: 2/9/2025 7:23:00 AM
Good one very passionate. Sara K
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Date: 2/8/2025 8:55:00 AM
Good advice and great title!
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Date: 2/8/2025 12:28:00 AM
Dear beautiful Valsa, your senryu is so heartwarming and romantic! I absolutely adore your title with "hey valentine" how welcoming and sweet is that... and as the words proceed "embrace with burning desire" The hues of passion there are so gorgeous! Brilliantly written for the contest, sending you many best wishes and light. Missed reading your poetry during my time being away from soup :)
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Date: 2/7/2025 10:30:00 PM
Romantic and lovely, Valsa. Best of luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 2/7/2025 6:48:00 PM
Love's Day doesn't last long enough. Happy Valentine Day to you. May you receive chocolates.
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Date: 2/7/2025 7:07:00 AM
Sounds like a winner to me. Good luck in contest. Happy Valentine's day!
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Date: 2/7/2025 5:20:00 AM
lovely entry dear , best of luck in life and in poetry too :)
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Date: 2/7/2025 4:57:00 AM
Dear Valsa, Wow, steamy in just a few words, you capture the essence of longing and passion with such intensity. The simplicity makes it even more powerful, leaving space for me to feel every spark.Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/7/2025 4:53:00 AM
I love your romantic Senru Valsa! Good Luck in the contest!!
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Date: 2/6/2025 11:48:00 PM
Dear sweet valsa, I absolutely love your valentine senryu, and its cute how youv titled it too, “ hey valentine” and i love the way youv written “ embrace with burning desire” lovely reminder! To your readers! Whichever form you do, your words always flow so well and that is truly impressive! Best wishes in the contest. Sending you light always
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Date: 2/6/2025 10:42:00 PM
Romance as big as that giraffe. Loved your picture, dear Valsa.
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Date: 2/6/2025 12:36:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "hey valentine" write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day today and on Valentine's Day.................
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Date: 2/6/2025 10:48:00 AM
Very romantic Valsa, I could be wrong but I think it's only ONE senryu for the contest. Greetings from Spain, hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 2/6/2025 7:34:00 PM
So are you in Spain now? Have a great trip. Thank you so much Tom for the information. I have cut short it into just one.

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