Haiku 5 - First Flowers

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winter will soon end there’s movement beneath white snow ~~ crocus stalks emerge

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 1/22/2021 8:28:00 AM

Yes, it's almost here. Great poem, Victor :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/21/2021 12:18:00 PM

Was just thinking about those first flowers that emerge. A beautiful prelude to spring.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/20/2021 8:55:00 PM

Oh this is pretty! Love it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2021 2:29:00 PM

a beauty, both the poem and the picture.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/20/2021 10:44:00 AM

The picture and the poem perfect. Well penned Haiku Victor. God bless. ~ Ani

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/19/2021 9:58:00 PM

It won't be long. Flowers can be amazingly tough. A beautiful haiku. :=)

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2021 9:49:00 PM

I remember as a child, looking for them and the snowdrops in our garden to appear through the snow, in the uk. Lovely poem, and thanks for taking me back for the moment..Stay Safe, Victor..Harry

Judy Ball

Date: 1/19/2021 1:58:00 PM

Oh I do love the first bursts of color from the crocus and . Well done and love the pic. God Bless, JB

Peter Dome

Date: 1/19/2021 12:36:00 PM

Just beautiful. Love the visual and love pic. a sure winner for me. Take care.Pete.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2021 8:55:00 AM

They are such beautiful flowers but I don't have any luck with them in my yard. I guess it is too hot in the south. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara