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Guiding Star O'Er Washington

I pray a bright star will shine in the air O'er Washington to guide some wise men there Bringing gifts of commonsense And harmony to dispense To a nation that is in disrepair Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2012 8:32:00 PM

Hi Bob H., harmony... will arrive.. enjoyed once againa very lovely and thoughtful poem.. thank you for sharing your poem,.. always,..p.d.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/17/2012 6:31:00 PM

Our elected officials in DC could use a lot of guidance right now. Another great limerick Bob.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2011 4:56:00 PM

Great political work..Enjoyed reading your creative presentation of the idea..Sad that our nation that was founded on such great principles has deteriorated to the levels of today..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 12/7/2011 3:21:00 PM

Amen and Amen and Amen my brother. May it be so this year. A fine write with a very important message for those who have an ear. God Bless, JB

Daver Austin

Date: 12/7/2011 3:15:00 PM

First rate, Sgt. In the Air Force I was stationed in Rapid City - can remember standing outside the jamesways on Christmas Eve - I was in radar - with some other guys looking at the sky for UFOs. There was a big thing that year about UFOs. The mind is a powerful thing. We tried very hard to conjure up a space ship. Have a great Christmas. Love, daver

James Peranteau

Date: 12/7/2011 1:50:00 PM

I wit ya dear poet ! LOL... A new soul as Abe may cause a charge, yet, Jehovah demands and commands ! Have a wonderful week Robert....much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2011 6:47:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your outstanding poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more Bob. This time of year we all are so busy and I for one don't have a lot of time right now but I will try. I love reading the poetry of the many talented poets here at the Soup. Hope to be reading your poetry for many more years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/6/2011 11:02:00 PM

Dear Bob H., a very gifted writer ... The light will follow a very thoughtful limerick~.ENJOYED.. thank you for sharing your wonderful poem;-) Have yourself a very lovely day, always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2011 10:33:00 PM

If it were Mitt Romney, I might vote for that one!

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 12/6/2011 4:28:00 PM

Sir Robert! Long time. It's pleasure to read your poems as usual. I love this poem from your greatest fan Sidney

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/6/2011 1:26:00 PM

Perfect and extremely wonderful write Bob! Awesome Limerick!! And we are definitely in disrepair(Spelling Error?) Thanks for sharing we all of us! Lovely Work!!

Tony Lane

Date: 12/6/2011 12:54:00 PM

Instead of more shooting stars.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/6/2011 11:27:00 AM

Excellent, Bob! I love this! We certainly need some wise men in this country. Kim

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/6/2011 11:05:00 AM

* "I WOULD SURELY & DO * SECOND THIS LOVING & NEEDFUL PRAYER * MY DEAR WONDERFUL & PRECIOUS ROBERT * MAY THE HANDS OF GOOD FORTUNE & THE LIGHT OF MERCY POUR INTO THEIR MINDS & HEARTS * VERY BEAUTIFUL * HAPPY HOLIDAYS DEAR SARGE * MY LUV ALWAYS * SARAH." *