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Great Escape

Graveyard of thoughts awakening Reminiscent in shadows of yesteryear Elusive like these dreams tempting me As if i were to follow them through their enigma Towards the echoes of night's faint beat Every pulse moves you closer to me Shadowing the existence of mind's thoughts Compiling them from your soul's lyric Amidst the whispered words of this arcana Prompting me to follow in the abyss of sleep Escaping these dreams i no longer foresee *acrostic & anacrostic

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2021 12:33:00 PM

wow what an awesome achievement, I struggle to write a decent acrostic let alone anacrostic, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2021 9:22:00 AM

Awesome combination of acrostic and anacrostic, Sandra. have a happy fourth. and congrats here.

Running Wolves

Date: 1/23/2020 7:38:00 AM

I really like this poem even though it has a slight sadness to it, and if one reads it bottom to top it reads pretty good as well

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/16/2020 12:07:00 AM

Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Sandra..

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/16/2020 10:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Jenish... :) hugs

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2020 7:27:00 PM

Great write and win Sandra, Congrats..

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 8:06:00 PM

thank you so much Joseph :) hugs

John Watt

Date: 1/15/2020 5:28:00 PM

Such transcendent words have made the 'great escape' from your golden pen. It is always a pleasure to read your inimitable writes, Sandra. Congratulations ~ John

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 6:56:00 PM

wow thank you so much John for such kind words... :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/15/2020 2:58:00 PM

I am happy to see that John appreciated this wonderful entry and awarded it 1st Place, Sandra. Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 6:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie :) hugs and blessings XoXo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/15/2020 2:44:00 PM

Brilliant! Congrats on first place!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 6:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/15/2020 2:28:00 PM

Congrats my friend on your TOP placement--you write so effortlessly and brilliantly, no matter the form--and deserve all the accolades you receive.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 6:54:00 PM

Wow Thank you so much Vijay, your kind words touched me...i am honored to share the podium with talent such as you as well :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/15/2020 2:14:00 PM

No one I would rather share the top spot with than you Sandy. Congratulations! This beautiful poem deserved to be at the top. It was amazing and truly your talent shines here.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 6:53:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris... honored to stand on the podium with you... hugs

John Hamilton

Date: 1/15/2020 2:01:00 PM

This is an amazing testimony to your talent Sandy, a double acrostic with emotion, just what I wanted, congrats on another top win, thanks for entering!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 6:53:00 PM

Thank you so much John...i am honored by your words and the win... thank you for hosting these contests that always challenge me... hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/14/2020 6:06:00 PM

Hello Sandra Adams, I sense that this poem is a winner for the contest, have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/15/2020 5:53:00 PM

Hello Sandra, you are welcome.Enjoy your evening my friend.Hugs.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 6:35:00 PM

what a kind thing to say... thank you Darlene :) Have a great night... hugs

Robertina B.

Date: 1/14/2020 9:23:00 AM

I absolutely enjoyed your powerful write, Sandra.. The words flowed perfectly! You had written another gem, my friend.. Your talent shines! A Happy New Year ! With many blessings..

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 12:22:00 PM

Thank you so much Robertina :) hugs and blessings.. happy new year to you as well :)

Robert Kinard

Date: 1/13/2020 9:25:00 AM

I can see you placing in this contest. Nicely done.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/13/2020 9:59:00 AM

thank you Robert :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/11/2020 2:19:00 AM

Beautiful contender for top prize in that contest!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/11/2020 8:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren...i have seen some good ones for this contest...so not so sure it will be at the top but i am pleased with your faith in it :) hugs

Winged Warrior

Date: 1/10/2020 2:49:00 PM

Nice-very creative Sandra...a top winner for sure...ciao bella...^WW^ :o)

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 9:02:00 PM

grazie molto... It was a fun write ...thank you for stopping by... have a great weekend... hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/10/2020 12:26:00 PM

I am very much impressed by this powerful and creative take on the contest theme, Sandra! A top winner in mho. Regards // paul

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 12:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Paul :) hugs

Funom Makama

Date: 1/10/2020 10:50:00 AM

This is beautiful. I love this masterpiece. Happy new year friend. Keep the lines blessing.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 11:02:00 AM

Thank you... happy new year....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2020 8:24:00 PM

very splendidly you pulled this one off, Sandy. My hat is off to you!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/10/2020 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend... :) hugs

Jeff Connelly

Date: 1/9/2020 5:54:00 PM

Sandra this is brilliant not only that it's an acrostic but the body, or should I say corpse, itself. I'm a great lover of poe, so I'm sure he is pulling on the coffin string attached to the bell to let people know he wants dug up and to meet you lol. Thank you and how your mind works Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/9/2020 7:51:00 PM

Thank you...i take that as a high compliment :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/9/2020 3:13:00 PM

Great escape this is Sandy dwelling in verses of dreams and romance...you certainly know how to evoke emotive response my friend. Sure to win at the TOP.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/9/2020 4:59:00 PM

Wow... thank you so much Vijay... this came out of nowhere today...thanks for such positive feedback :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 1/9/2020 2:58:00 PM

Wow! Cleverly crafted, my friend, and quite intriguing... Good luck in the contest!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/9/2020 4:58:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend... :) hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/9/2020 1:52:00 PM

This impressive piece is sure to be a top winner with John. It must have taken you some time to create. This is spectacular Sandy! Bravo! xxoo

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/9/2020 2:41:00 PM

Thank you so much for such a kind comment... would you believe it was written in less than an hour while multi tasking, my sister was sending me texts as i was writing it :) hugs XoXo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/9/2020 12:57:00 PM

Excellent, Sandra, and quite a creative approach to the theme. Dreams are the poor man's portal to adventure. Your acrostic is meaningful and thought-provoking. Surely a winner!

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/9/2020 2:39:00 PM

Wow thank you so much Carolyn. I looked at this contest last night thinking I would write for it tonight when I had time but it came to me this afternoon pretty quickly :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/9/2020 12:17:00 PM

Wow, wow, wow, I love this and it is an acrostic both ways. Is there any end to your talent or creativity my friend. That could not have been easy to do but you sure made it look that way. I see this one in first place. Incredibly beautiful Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/9/2020 2:37:00 PM

Wow your comment brought a huge smile. I wrote it in less than an hour. It came kind of easily .. you should try one some time :) thank you Chris :) hugs