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Fantasy

I rubbed my eyes at the amazing sight, A young bear and his bride about to wed. The tree tops parted to admit the light. The bride was dressed in lacy dress of white. The bridegroom wore a bowler on his head. I rubbed my eyes at the amazing sight. I feared I'd be thrown out without invite. The preacher wore a robe of brilliant red. The tree tops parted to admit the light. The forest creature guests were packed in tight. The motley choir was by a raccoon led. I rubbed my eyes at the amazing sight. Fierce enemies were seated left and right. At any other time one would be dead. The tree tops parted to admit the light. The festive crowd was dressed in colors bright And patiently awaiting to be fed. I rubbed my eyes at the amazing sight. The tree tops parted to admit the light. 7/09/13

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Date: 2/11/2019 11:13:00 PM
Delightful, Joyce. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 1/26/2019 7:41:00 PM
what a cute fantasy you created, Joyce. You are going strong as ever with this winning villanelle . Congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/26/2019 5:58:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Joyce! Delightful! Janice
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Date: 1/26/2019 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on this awesome poem's win, Joyce! It's probably the most interesting villanelle I've ever seen as the hook to wildlife is astonishing. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2019 4:30:00 PM
Thank you Nina for a job well done and adding my contribution to the top ten. It was a great contest. Joyce
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Date: 1/26/2019 2:44:00 PM
Fanciful and very engaging. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:14:00 PM
Congrats on your great win, Joyce!
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Date: 6/24/2015 8:08:00 AM
What a lovely and entertaining fantasy, Joyce! Congratulations on being placed first in the contest! Take care. // paul
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:34:00 AM
Joyce, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 6/24/2015 12:47:00 AM
Nice to see you on here Joyce, Love PD
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Date: 6/23/2015 9:09:00 PM
ahhhh, this is a really cute fantasy of forest creatures!! Big congrats for your awesome win, Joyce.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:45:00 PM
The things you see if you go down to the woods today, Joyce. Congratulations on a super first. Viv x
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:37:00 PM
What a delightful piece. Congratulations on our top spot.
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Date: 6/23/2015 8:19:00 PM
Congrad's Joyce nice to speak to you again, hope you are well? Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:36:00 PM
Beautifully penned Joyce many congrats:-)hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:11:00 PM
How delightful, Joyce. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve * @-)--< 7
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Date: 6/23/2015 12:12:00 PM
congrats on 1st place Joyce with this utterly delightful poem Hugs 7
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Date: 4/6/2014 5:11:00 AM
Well written! Congrats on your victory!!
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Date: 4/3/2014 1:22:00 PM
Lovely, winning poem Joyce... Linda
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Date: 1/16/2014 5:50:00 PM
Lovely villanelle, I've always loved thhat folk tale, nice job of conveying it.
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:33:00 AM
Joyce, Your entry is magnificent. You are the master of fantasy flavored poetry... I recognize and covet your skill.... Hugs and congrats..... Jake.
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on this amazing write and first place in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:48:00 AM
Great write indeed!! Congratulations friend Joyce on your grand win!!! Cheers!!1 Hugs, Maria
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:46:00 AM
Joyce congratulations on your outstanding win. I praise you with the fabulous imagination created in this delightful poem. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/9/2013 7:32:00 AM
Joyce, congratulations on your big win with this awesome poem, Constance
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