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Fable's Dreamland

And dusk invites more bouncing glee, as ribbons knot Queen Fey’s gold stick like wiggles coil on toes, how free to laugh around while clouds frolic. when kiddies shout, "let's pirouette", while hours sway in minuet! Fable Contest Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/11/2017 10:56:00 PM

Hi Nette, I really enjoyed this fable. Great imagery as well. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 3/11/2017 9:09:00 PM

Wonderful fable, Nette, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 2:53:00 PM

Nette,, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/17/2014 6:52:00 PM

Very pretty. congratulations on our win. Love, Joyce

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 7/16/2014 10:06:00 AM

Congrats on yor fantastic top wining poem! Fairyland fun in jolly rhyme! Warm wishes nette.

Roy Jerden

Date: 7/16/2014 8:52:00 AM

Very nice tale, Nette! Congratulations!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/16/2014 1:22:00 AM

Beautiful write Nette,, congrats on top place win!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2014 7:36:00 PM

Simply enchanting - a worthy winner:-) Hugs Jan xx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/15/2014 12:09:00 PM

This was a beautifully developed write! Beautifully written piece.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 3/10/2014 6:29:00 PM

This was a wonderful, whimsical poem, Nette. I enjoyed this so much. An enchanting write! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the great comments! :)

Donna Jones

Date: 3/9/2014 11:12:00 PM

Who doesn't love to blow those bubbles....and this is a magical sumer fun poem nett..sure to be on top.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 3/9/2014 6:06:00 AM

So playful and fun. A joy to read.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2014 6:06:00 AM

Great flow in this one..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/7/2014 11:02:00 PM

You certainly brought the child out from within me! Each line lit me up with a smile of tenderness and joy of being a child! You are a genius of a poet my friend! Was this a challenge for you, because it seemed to flow so easily throughout your poem! What a harmonious piece, Great Work!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/7/2014 8:15:00 PM

This is very beautiful Nette. Sometimes I wish I lived in a fairy land. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla

Tiaua M Ioane

Date: 3/7/2014 5:35:00 PM

Very artistic, beautiful setting for an escape from our troubled world - your dreamland! Tiaua.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/7/2014 2:54:00 PM

love this truly magical piece, Nette

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2014 2:06:00 PM

An exciting delve into the garden of dreams where the imagination frolics unconstrained...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/7/2014 1:41:00 PM

- If I become 99 years ..... I will always have a bit of "child" in my soul ..... dreams, joy and a little adventure .... Nice to read your lovely poem, Nette. - ALWAYS!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/7/2014 1:24:00 PM

Enchantment ...A world escape to magic..Yes these are such feelings you transmitted in this poem.Happy Friday sweet Nette...Make the best of it..Hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/7/2014 1:07:00 PM

This could not be more delightful.....and makes one want to be childlike again. A frolic through each stanza.... Love it !!