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Life without you seems so surreal, so unfair that you are no longer here, yet I still feel your strong presence, smiling while shedding a tear. Although you've gone, so many memories reflect through my mind, in times of trouble, you were always there, treating me so kind. The amazing times we shared, forever live within my heart. Physically we are not together, but mentally we are never apart. Constant reminders of your unique fragrance still linger in the air, especially in your closet, still full of clothes you loved to wear. Ringing of your unique and contagious laughter still rings within my ears, I know many more recollections like these will last a zillion years. A white dove visits often, reminding me of your angelic grace, every time I look into the mirror, I see your beautiful face. Thank you for being my guardian angel, for showing signs that you're around. Until we meet again my dearest, my love for you will continue to abound. In days or sorrow, you always soothed with words of sincerity. Even after death our special bond will remain for eternity.
Silent One collaboration with Cecile MacFarlane 9 November 2020 Cecile Macfarlane, is a poet who has been on Poetry Soup for a while, but her busy, busy life prevents her from posting regularly. A very talented poet. Please check out her poems. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poems_by_poet.aspx?ID=14189

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Date: 9/17/2023 4:22:00 PM
Silent one, Just found this and enjoyed tho sad. Just lost friend of 45 years, so deeply felt every word. You two did great!
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Date: 11/18/2020 2:28:00 PM
Well done both of you. What a great write.For many today, memories are all we have.take care. Pete.
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Date: 11/13/2020 8:05:00 AM
I LOVE LOVE this poem and have faved it. Memories never die, your poem is evidence of that - God Bless you my friend, eternity will be shared with a lost love. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 11/13/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thank you.. Credit to Cecilia, who was the brian behind this one..
Date: 11/13/2020 8:03:00 AM
I ADORE this poem, the loss of your loved one brought tears to my eyes, my good friend, but as you say you have your own personal guardian angel until you meet and then together, for eternity, you will watch over others in your family. I have faved this brilliant poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
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Silent One
Date: 11/13/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you.. You are right..
Date: 11/12/2020 11:47:00 PM
Touched by poem and music. lovely.
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Silent One
Date: 11/13/2020 8:20:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/11/2020 3:36:00 PM
You never disappoint in your writing, Silent One. This is such a magnificent poem :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/12/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/11/2020 5:23:00 AM
WoW! Silent, This is such a poignant and well written collaboration between you and Cecile. It allowed your reader to see the incredible bond that two people can have, for it goes beyond death. Even death can’t break it! Well done my friend-Alexis
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:45:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/11/2020 2:29:00 AM
Beautifully penned!
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:58:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2020 8:43:00 PM
Your thoughts caress so beautifully around each other. This is filled with so many emotions. Memories live on. So kind of you to encourage another poetess, Silent One. Wonderful collaboration between you and Cecile. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/10/2020 1:45:00 PM
Poignant is the best word that comes to my mind reading this one. It's too bad Cecile is so busy. It seems ages since I've had a visit from her!
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:58:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 11/10/2020 11:36:00 AM
Good work between you two. Thanks for sharing it with us. Enjoyed reading it. Sara..Your visit was uplifting.
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Silent One
Date: 11/11/2020 9:58:00 AM
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Date: 11/10/2020 6:55:00 AM
How true we never lose our lovely memories. ~~
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 7:40:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/10/2020 5:41:00 AM
This is a beautiful collaboration! These memories never go away. I enjoyed this :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/10/2020 5:10:00 AM
This is a amazing!! LOVE it. It's a fave. God Bless you both :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:31:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 10:01:00 PM
A most beautiful collaboration. Love never dies. Good wishes, Evelyn :)
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:32:00 AM
Thank you.. You always have the memories..
Date: 11/9/2020 8:43:00 PM
Some great lines, doing a collab brings out the best in both of you. Well done ~ John
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:32:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/9/2020 8:23:00 PM
Amazing...these words speak directly to me. I love it. Very inspiring.
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:32:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/9/2020 5:15:00 PM
Silent one it was awesome and a pleasure doing a collaboration with you. Thank you so much. Hugs
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:32:00 AM
Thank you.. my pleasure and I look forward to seeing you post more..
Date: 11/9/2020 4:48:00 PM
Such a lovely, moving, descriptive poem! Janice
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 4:45:00 PM
Tears ;( Touched me wholeheartedly. Yes, you guys did such a heartfelt collaboration! I love it!
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:40:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 4:20:00 PM
Lovely collaboration, SO. So many beautiful pensive lines always with an undercurrent of consolation. Thank you for sharing your collaboration with Cecile.
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 5:41:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/9/2020 2:39:00 PM
Silent One, I love your poem "Eternal Memories". It is soooo touching. That is exactly how I feel about my beloved husband whom I lost years ago. God bless and take care. <3
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 6:10:00 AM
This was focused on Cecile's mum and sister, so I am happy it reminded you about your husband.. That is the beauty of poetry.. Thank you..
Date: 11/9/2020 1:40:00 PM
Heartfelt rendering of cherished memories--tugs the heart. Kudos to you SO, and Cecile for this emotive, talented write.
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 6:11:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 11/9/2020 1:23:00 PM
Some memories we can never forget. Beautiful poem, Silent One
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 6:13:00 AM
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Date: 11/9/2020 11:55:00 AM
That’s an amazing collaboration poem, well done you and Cecile... Belle
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Silent One
Date: 11/10/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you..
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