Elementary

in death there is life for those left to feed upon knowledge food for thought © Harry J Horsman 2017

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Joe Dimino

Date: 2/27/2018 5:42:00 AM

Though the spirit often speaks in parables, the sound mind and heart, clearly responds to truth. Great write, Harry; profound but not so profound for other believers. Thank you sharing such important wisdom. Blessings my friend!

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/12/2017 5:03:00 PM

Good use of so few words. Reads good enough to be placed inside a fortune cookie.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/12/2017 11:43:00 AM

Very thoughtful and intriguing poem, harry.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/7/2017 12:41:00 AM

A great senryu that makes us ponder. Thumbs up wow! So nice to read from your pen again. Pls do review my latest poem too.

Silent One

Date: 12/4/2017 10:49:00 AM

Everytime I see the word elementary, I think of Sherlock holmes... Great senryu, very deep....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2017 5:05:00 PM

wow, deep one. The title for it was so clever, Harry Thanks for this new post!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/3/2017 2:53:00 PM

These three lines are like a sparking plug that sets our thoughts racing, Harry. By changing words around we can also get: 'There is life after death'. Regards // paul