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DREAMS OF YESTERDAY AND TODAY Leaves falling during autumns years they bless my ribbon memories of how it was childhood shadows brown like withered grass for now am old and soon shall breathe my last.. I sit quiet to travel on bygone days, on the streets before, I have ropes to play blend of dolls and bubbles also made me gay but the child in me still yearns to pass these ways. From curves of mountains to nations across the sea, to journey more, I ask God to direct where I'll be... I passed a plant its leaves swaying with the breeze, years fold, the same plant is now a fruit-bearing tree. I view the puffy-feathered skies and its blue, I smile each breaking dawn for it's silvery new. I tackle each task fast and through but before I knew, hours gone and done, I finished some-- I missed a few. When evenings globes of wordless speech shine allowing me to run, run into garden of dreams, of childhood once supreme but they shoot away in flutter flash on life's fluctuating stream. I hugged my knees to stop my tears a while remembering decades when my body is still a child. I keep the tears to my chest as I go by, if only, good times replay... I want them again. Each bulging grin that rise unto east horizon, Each satellite, modelling slow on her turning points in stellar of green, and her clouds of powder white, I quench my thirst drinking the beaming tides. Down earth, I linger to verdure adorned of rosy blush even from the arch where the gentle winds is seen to dwarf liquid curls that roll near the shore, I dreamt yesterday and still am dreaming today... Twenty years ago, blooms and fruits hang on vines so fragrant, so fragrant were those days of mine Now no more; their traces I could not find; Today, I need to make more golden memories etched to time as later, I'll be leaving them behind And if someday, one wanders in my lifes forest despite blowing winds and thunderstorms, like the tiny plant, may I be that fruit-bearing tree. ___________________________________________________________ Open Poetry Contest - Poetry Contest Sponsor Charlotte Puddifoot ~~~3rd place~~~ OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO 9:15 pm, July 11, 2015

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Date: 10/29/2017 8:19:00 PM
Hello Olive. I'm new to Poetry Soup but have read your piece on Becca's blog. You have accumulated an impressive vault of work here!!! It must have been quite difficult to select only one ... but I can see why you've pointed us here. Amazing piece and I'm happy to have discovered you! Best, Judy
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Date: 10/29/2017 9:45:00 AM
I remember this piece, you are truly talented. You are a gift to the soup. God has been kind to us by placing you here as a witness to His Love. Keep writing!
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Date: 10/28/2017 5:18:00 AM
An epic poem with some amazing lines Olive.. I remember reading this when I first joined back in 2015..
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:56:00 PM
As always your words inspire me to write better poems. This is a brilliant poem and reflects the nature and the goodness of its AUTHOR! A 7
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Date: 7/30/2015 8:17:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert... =') Your comments truly insire me to write more.. I just wish i have more time amd focus... still have some other priorities
Date: 7/25/2015 3:29:00 AM
This is amazingly beautiful! Congrats on you well deserved win!
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Date: 7/28/2015 10:58:00 AM
thank you so much for your booster comment COnnie.. :D!
Date: 7/22/2015 2:57:00 AM
Wonderful work dear Olive! Congrats on superb win!
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Date: 7/24/2015 3:52:00 AM
thank you so much Dr. Upma.. :D! I am glad you like my poem.. :)~
Date: 7/22/2015 12:01:00 AM
Very fascinating to be taken into your dreams of yesterday and today. So lovely and the imagery is undeniably enchanting. Congrats, Olive. 7 (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 7/23/2015 4:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Noel.. I really appreciate you stopping by.. :D! thanks,,,
Date: 7/20/2015 1:46:00 PM
Congrats, Olive! Honored to be in the same list as you and Nette. hugs! :-)
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Date: 7/21/2015 11:51:00 PM
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! =') whoever places Kim in the contests... I am so happy when I see a Pinay or Pinoy up there... =') It shows that though we are still have that blood of Francisco Balagtas and Jose Rizal.. :D!
Date: 7/20/2015 5:39:00 AM
Olive, could you please send me some of that fruit you were eating.....This is a marvelous, melancholy, meandering through the dreams and memories that bring us to fruition..Well Done
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Date: 7/21/2015 11:48:00 PM
Thank you so much John.. =')!!! hehehhe mmmmmn maybe because of so many revelations that passed my life.. =')
Date: 7/20/2015 3:59:00 AM
Hi Olive_eloi! This is one of your best poems. Effortlessly written and full of tasteful imagery; dreams and memories are both a major part of life. By the way, you are already a fruit-bearing tree; you have positively touched my life in many ways. Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/21/2015 11:45:00 PM
PAul, thank you so much for seeing me a fruit bearing tree.. =') And I will not hesitate to tell you also that you are a fruit bearing tree too.. =') Well, I added lots of imagery here so as to emphasize that we should make colorful memories... =')
Date: 7/19/2015 8:27:00 PM
What a wistful, slightly melancholy piece, Olive. Superb. Congratulations, Viv x
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:52:00 AM
Thank you so much Viv.. =')
Date: 7/19/2015 6:11:00 PM
Olive,, congratulations in Charlotte Puddifootst... SKAT
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much Skat.. :D!
Date: 7/19/2015 4:35:00 PM
CAme here again to say CONGRATULATIONS.
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Date: 7/21/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Andie.. =') Kudos too!! :D!
Date: 7/19/2015 3:08:00 PM
olive, this is quite an epic piece, and surely you writing at your best! there are some lovely phrases and subtle alliteration - 'flutter flash on life's fluctuating stream' - a beautiful, thoughtful, soulful poem - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:01:00 AM
Charlotte, again I am glad that you find my entry worthy of a place.. Thank you for the wonderful comment..!!=')
Date: 7/19/2015 2:40:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Olive:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/20/2015 8:00:00 AM
thanks much JAn.. =')
Date: 7/17/2015 10:57:00 AM
Olive Eloisa . . . This is such a dreamy and lovely write. The flow of your words, imagery, and the message of your verses pull the reader into the text of your poem mesmerizing and enchanting the reader at the same time. Your mention of the fruit-bearing tree conjures an eternal connection to both God and Nature. An Outstanding Write -- and most worthy of a "7" + FAV in my book!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Date: 7/20/2015 7:57:00 AM
GAry,I thank you for your lovely comments.. for me Gary, asap I want to connect with my reader through all the senses... Imagery is another wow! However, asap I also want to deliver some message.. =') thanks much and adding this as one of your fave is wow.. =')
Date: 7/16/2015 2:30:00 PM
As the time passess everything change according to the strength hidden in it but memories keep alive. One thing is that in every matured one a child is there in, it's true. With an egoless nice feeling seeking to be a fruit bearing tree is an excellent expression of beauty of thoughts, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 7/20/2015 7:53:00 AM
Bl you nailed some of my points here... =') I am so happy with your comment..Generous and inspiring me to write more.. ~Olive ELoisa
Date: 7/16/2015 1:44:00 AM
Excellent. So beautiful poetry. You are so talent. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 7/20/2015 7:51:00 AM
Ravi thank you so much for dropping a comment.. I appreciate it.. =')~Olive Eloisa
Date: 7/16/2015 12:16:00 AM
Years may pass and we become older but old memories will remain forever... Girl ,this is the best poem ever !!! :O)) Beauty and talent ,all for Olive ^_^
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Date: 7/19/2015 1:15:00 AM
Aiyah, kapwa ko pinay, I thank you for this sweet mega booster comment!! well, you embody such words too!!! God bless.. :D!=')! ~Olive ELoisa
Date: 7/15/2015 4:15:00 PM
enjoyed your write, Luv p.d.
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Date: 7/17/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thank you linda.. :)
Date: 7/14/2015 1:05:00 PM
dear me, eloi... how deep and redeeming is this artpiece...yes, make more memories last!... ang husay!.. huggs
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Date: 7/17/2015 6:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Nette.. :)
Date: 7/14/2015 7:09:00 AM
Such a Lovely poem Olive, You write really beautiful poetry, yes you do and may The hand of GOD keep guiding you.
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Date: 7/17/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Milton.. i will keep this in mind.. =')
Date: 7/13/2015 4:35:00 PM
So much here to appreciate! You have been blessed with a gift.
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Date: 7/17/2015 4:36:00 AM
RIchard thank you so much. I appreciate you reading my poems and dropping a comment.. :D!
Date: 7/13/2015 1:32:00 PM
I'm enjoying wandering in your life's forest little one. I loved this so much when you shared it initially at the weekend, I knew you'd written a gem of a poem. As I mentioned at the time, you've taken your poetry to another level. So looking forward to writing with your soon in person, hugs always//James xxx
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Date: 7/17/2015 4:22:00 AM
Huge James, maybe I was just inspired at that time... Thank you so much for wandering in my lifes forest... I presume it attracted you much.. :D! thanks much and God bless us always!!! hugs and hugs //Olive Eloisa =')
Date: 7/12/2015 5:24:00 PM
My goodness. it is perfection, Olive.
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Date: 7/15/2015 8:04:00 PM
Andie, Thank you.. MAybe I was truly inspired again when I am writing this one. =")!
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