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8/28/24 Submitted to the Pick-A-Title, Vol 45- Poetry Contest of Edward Ibeh

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When I see him standing in the doorway with that luscious grin upon his lips, I cannot turn away although I’m feeling flushed as if a fever has grabbed a hold of me! I meet his seductive gaze and hope he cannot see that I’m beginning to perspire. Oh, cool cool fever; it has taken hold again. How easily his being near me causes me to sweat. How can I feel so suddenly the chills going through my body while simultaneously my temperature is rising? Hot, hot, hot is his physicality.. Hot-blooded I become just seeing him. Fever floods my body as I tremble with the anticipation of his mere touch. How ardently he wraps his arms around me. How fervently he kisses me in all the places that he knows I’m wanting to be kissed. Higher and higher my fever rises. Only he can bring me what I long for until at last I shiver at the climax of our passion. The fever subsides but I know it won’t be long before cool fever will again catch hold of me!

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Date: 8/23/2024 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Cool Fever" write/story. Did you give your computer a cool shower after writing this???  Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 8/22/2024 4:24:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this fantastic penning, Andrea. Not too many people chose this theme but you did it justice!
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Date: 8/12/2024 6:00:00 AM
Andrea, Ahh the passion of physical attraction. How lucky we are as a species that we can feel these things you describe so well. Smiling
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Date: 8/11/2024 1:15:00 PM
Oh Andrea, I'm not sure Ive read a poem like this from your pen.. I'm lost for words..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:55:00 PM
Also I'm not sure of anywhere else a person can go with this title!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:52:00 PM
You are Silent One after all. haha. I do have a few of these scattered around!!
Date: 8/11/2024 11:03:00 AM
Luckily, 'All things must pass' and cold-shower remediation keeps the elevator neighborhood from veering off superfluous topics to your aromatic offerings which, mendacity would ascribe to "your lovely dress". A jest (just) request.
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Robert Warlov
Date: 8/11/2024 4:00:00 PM
Keep 'um laugin'!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:51:00 PM
Ha!
Date: 8/11/2024 5:05:00 AM
Ooh sweet andrea i love seeing this side of you too! So passionate and sensual and so lyrical how youv woven it all in such a creative manner. Very detailed and sounds like one that knows the right places to touch ardently with fervent kisses! Hot! Well written! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes in the contest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:53:00 PM
Thanks, Ink. Oh, to be young again!
Date: 8/11/2024 2:46:00 AM
Passionate one. I don't remember these kinds of feelings. LOL..Been a long time since love was here. Sara K
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:51:00 PM
yeah, it's been quite a number of years. Right, dearie?
Date: 8/11/2024 2:35:00 AM
passionate it is. cool write dear poet.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:53:00 PM
thanks
Date: 8/10/2024 3:14:00 PM
This is very erotic...but romantic. A "cool fever" indeed!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:54:00 PM
thank you, Paige
Date: 8/10/2024 1:40:00 PM
enjoyed the sensation of feeling hot, then cold which your images jived well into...romance lives on.. amazing, andie!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/11/2024 2:52:00 PM
thanks, Nette
Date: 8/10/2024 12:26:00 PM
Reminds me of that sensual song Fever which I love very much. Great poem. But try to keep cool. Hugs.
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