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Come To Me Out While I'm Sleeping

Tonight, the dark, not night, is through With the bearing of nimbus sheets. Before I dreamt in dreams, I knew Tonight, the dark, not night, is through. The draft in air says you're here, too. A sixth light, you enter for me. Tonight, the dark, not night, is through With the bearing of nimbus sheets.

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Date: 8/31/2024 3:52:00 PM
Creative work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K
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Date: 8/19/2024 11:11:00 PM
A wonderful poem, filled with emotions and a great refrain.
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Date: 8/19/2024 5:14:00 AM
Dear Paige, I loved the blend of anticipation and longing within the natural world. As I read your artistry, I believe you conveyed such a powerful emotional journey, reflecting on our own experiences of transition and hope. Excellent Read for me this morning! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/18/2024 9:31:00 AM
Nicely done and great use of the refrain.. You did the from really well..
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Date: 8/18/2024 6:44:00 AM
Tonight im reading your refrain here and thinking, how catchy is your life! What a beautiful poem so well written and delivered. I love the fact that you do all these different forms always. Sending you light
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Date: 8/18/2024 12:10:00 AM
This is so beautiful. Love it's message. Isn't triolet a wonderful little form?
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Date: 8/17/2024 9:42:00 PM
Dark clouds, foreboding, I guess it reminds me of Wuthering Heights. I love the hidden tension in it.
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Date: 8/17/2024 7:02:00 PM
Some cool writing, dear Paige!
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