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Chocolate Rabbit

C utest thing inside my basket, dark brown H are with eyes, sweet pink. I’ll take you O ut, then slowly, C ruelly . . . let my teeth into you sink. O bject of my L ust for chocolate, I’m an A ddict you can’t stop. You’ve T empted me. . . those tasty E ars into my mouth I first will pop! R avenous, I now A ttack you, head to little B unny feet, B reaking you I n bite-sized chunks, your frosted T ail, my final treat!! And. . . . . . (From several years back when we were playing Tag poems here at Soup. I know you must remember those days, PD!!)

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Date: 2/12/2024 6:45:00 PM
I love this poem <3
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Date: 4/30/2014 9:17:00 PM
HEY ANDREA, I'M GLAD YOU LIKED THAT ONE CHOCOLATE POEM. IT ACTUALLY WON IN A CONTEST :) SWEET WIN BY THE WAY.......SKAT
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Date: 4/26/2014 12:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea...
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:44:00 AM
Congrats on a fine placing Andrea. Should I feel sorry for the poor rabbit! nicely written. // paul
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Date: 4/26/2014 8:28:00 AM
ha ha you made me smile with this one... Andrea, ,Congratulations. <3 Thank you so much for supporting my contest. If you like, -stop by my latest blog "Dinner Date" Enjoy the tiny tribute to all the winning poems. Here's the link, just in case you're one of the new poets. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=22220&PoetID=18720 ***Have a Nice Day*** LINDA
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:08:00 AM
a fun time i recall on the soup... what happened to all them fun days... anyways...pd.
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Date: 2/6/2011 12:10:00 PM
Cute Acrostic!My son is a chocaholic!--kash
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Date: 4/6/2010 1:37:00 PM
Such a cute write that all of us chocoholics will understand...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:34:00 PM
Yes! I had one - bit its head off, ears and all. Strange thing - the bunny laid a real egg in the nest. You be so cool. Love, daver
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:22:00 AM
You have added a new flavor craze to this other wise favorite of millions of people. Great write on chocolate and fascinating too. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments on Vasava An untold story 11. Hope you would like 12 & 13 too. Best wishes and love...xxx Ravindra ...xxx Andrea Dietrich
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:20:00 AM
You have added a new flavor craze to this other wise favorite of millions of people. Great write on chocolate and fascinating too. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments on Vasava An untold story 11. Hope you would like 12 & 13 too. Best wishes and love
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Date: 4/4/2010 5:21:00 AM
I do like chocolate rabbits too, but this year I was too late to buy one as they were all sold out so I bout just some plain chocolate - special ones with pure cocoa from East New Britain (Papua New Guinea) made from genuine Trinitario cocoa. Chocolate and coffe together is very nice, but I should not eat too much because of my diabetes. Nice Acrostic, Andrea! Love, Gert P.S.: Do you understand (speak) some German?
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Date: 4/4/2010 12:09:00 AM
lol.I never knew you were this way.. this is funny.and cute. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:22:00 PM
Thanks. my Nine--Eleven poem is entitled that. When i try to pull up my poems now I can't get the anything but the edit version but there it is on page 2. Go to contest Winners and at page \see year of contest . Scroll to 2009 and you can fin that contest and all the winners. Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:21:00 PM
I'm ready for tomorrow! Andrea! we colored eggs tonite and decorated!...oh, yes! thanks for commenting on mojo buttons! you see now I process different than most, being a left-handed gemini! lol! jimbo
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:13:00 PM
I thought I had seen it all until I sawthis title Andrea. But ofcourse, chocolate candy rabbits do have their associated with easter. Smile! A mighty tasty poem you have here. Smile! Thanks I got myself a bite too. I am a bit confused too about this April poem contest. What the form should be. I know it supposed to be a two line with two syllabism. but not much else about it. I had to change accents on my words anyway before I submitted it. It rhymes, so that's what I called it.Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:29:00 PM
Funny and well constructed!
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Date: 4/3/2010 9:22:00 PM
Don't be confused Andrea.. in the Catholic faith this is the format for this holyday.. Good Friday . He died.. and then He was buried on Friday afternoon after 3p.m. Israeli time.. and while He lay in state the rest of Friday and all day Satureday (we call it Holy Saturday) contemplating the sacrifice He just made.. then rose Easter Sunday morn.. its a Catholic/Christian thing..hope this helps u understand my logic on the write.. am diligently in "contest mode"..haha..luv. ME..
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Date: 4/3/2010 8:40:00 PM
This is a cute tag. Andrea I could not, would not make something so sweet like your write. P.D. was here! Liked what I read.
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Date: 4/3/2010 8:20:00 PM
Funny Acrostic ..so very cute.. and so very fun for Debbie to try to top and continue the tag.. did u notify her that she was tagged?..if not she will be in limbo land ..haha... great job my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie.. luv your creativity!!!
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Date: 4/3/2010 8:00:00 PM
Really cute.. I love chocolate too,no one better mess with my rabbit.. love Constance
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Date: 4/3/2010 6:27:00 PM
funny, you sound like me--a chocoholic with a bunny need.
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