Chilling

I'm stuck on this sidewalk alone I can't contact god with no phone Confusing religion No carrier pigeon Why doesn't god send down a drone?

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/1/2022 3:37:00 PM

Hello Rico ... You have to think that God is overworked every day with what goes on in his realm - thanks Rico - Lindsay

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/30/2022 4:46:00 PM

Oh my, what a predicament! A fun Limerick.

Terry Flood

Date: 1/30/2022 4:03:00 PM

Voicemail! Every time, voicemail. Guess he’s busy right now, huh? Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/29/2022 10:07:00 PM

you don't have to have religion to have God. Faith is the phone.

Valsa George

Date: 1/29/2022 8:10:00 PM

Those who are stuck in life, if they call God's name aloud, He would send not drones, but even supersonic ! :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/29/2022 7:38:00 PM

Phones are over-rated. Prayer's better.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/29/2022 2:12:00 PM

Good one. God is there, He does hear and answer prayer. Sometimes the humans who are supposed to be doing God's work on earth are not doing His commands. I enjoyed reading this one. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/29/2022 12:53:00 PM

ha! yes, religion doesn't seem to keep up with the times, rico!

Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/29/2022 8:17:00 PM

Our laws are based upon the concept of, "a reasonable man". I suspect a reasonable man would expect their god to be a few steps ahead of Santa, wouldn't you? Aloha!