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Bottled Up

childhood destiny therapeutic tears shed for the spilling of milk John G. Lawless contest - In a Bottle sponsor - A Poet Destroyer

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/21/2014 5:00:00 AM

Creative one. congrats on the win, John

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/20/2014 10:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/20/2014 9:26:00 PM

I sure know about spilled milk with a three year old running around. Great senryu John, grats on your win. No crying over spilled milk.

Mark Trichet

Date: 8/20/2014 9:12:00 PM

remember it warming in the sun for us in primary school! crates of warm milk WELL DONE

Tim Smith

Date: 8/20/2014 6:51:00 PM

yes remember the days well...congrats

David Mohn

Date: 8/20/2014 6:05:00 PM

Very clever and deep John...congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2014 3:09:00 PM

wow, this is one of the best I have seen so far. GREAT job. and congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/20/2014 9:33:00 AM

John, Congratulations!!! Thank you for the awesome Bottled Up senryu. Stop by my latest blog, "You Sunk My "BATTLESHIP" :)" if you like. I enjoyed closing this contest. Always ~LINDA~