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Aspen Leaves

Designed sapphires - I would fondly call them, In red, yellow and variety green; In shapes round, oval, heart-like diadem, With white-red blood-vessels, tenderly seen; Like rings and ear-rings of a charming queen, Midst floors of forests blazing with sun-rays, Like ballet dancers, in bright garbs you glaze; Marveling at your mellow model-mode, Not blinking their eyes wild birds and beasts gaze; Breeze into magic melodies explode...! 30 October 2022 Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Theme: Nature Content Title: Aspen Leaves Syllables Counted at: howmanysyllables.com Rhymes checked at: rhymezone.com

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Date: 11/9/2022 11:22:00 AM
So glad to see this on the list, Chris. Congratulations
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/9/2022 6:54:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/8/2022 8:19:00 PM
Christuraj, a huge CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive poem. Great figures of speech! Janice
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Date: 11/7/2022 5:30:00 PM
Congratulatiions. on your placement. Love the alliteration. SuZ
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Date: 11/9/2022 6:55:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/7/2022 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations Chris, on your top win, with a beautiful Dizain, how good is this sequence, from mellow model-mode, to magic melodies explode, superb creativity! cheers David
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Date: 11/7/2022 5:05:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/6/2022 9:07:00 AM
Gorgeous images delight in this poem, Christuraj. Congratulations on a well deserved win. :)
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Date: 11/7/2022 5:05:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/6/2022 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Christuraj, a beautifully descriptive poem.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/7/2022 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/6/2022 5:53:00 AM
The leaves are picturesquely painted . Congratulations on your first place win, dear Chris !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/7/2022 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/6/2022 5:15:00 AM
Congrats on your TOP win--enjoyed the poem, Christuraj.
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Date: 11/6/2022 5:26:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/6/2022 2:17:00 AM
Awesome, simply magnificent write, Christuraj:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/6/2022 4:10:00 AM
Thank you very much Jo. Hearing from you after long.
Date: 11/5/2022 11:45:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I have learned another wondrous creation from God through your poem. God bless you.
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Beata. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/5/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thank you for introducing these beautiful leaves by your very wonderful and creative dizain my dear friend Christuraj! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/6/2022 4:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Len. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/5/2022 6:36:00 PM
A beautiful Dizain form poem Christuraj, aspen trees have pretty leaves and your poem certainly does them justice. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/6/2022 4:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Belle. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/5/2022 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Sotto's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/5/2022 10:11:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Christuraj! Congratulations on your big win!
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Ann. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/5/2022 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations for your great win :)
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:56:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/5/2022 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations from the heart for winning the contest. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:55:00 AM
Thank you, sir, for giving me an opportunity.
Date: 10/30/2022 10:17:00 AM
wow, VERY pretty!
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Date: 10/30/2022 6:48:00 PM
Thank you very much for the encouraging words.
Date: 10/30/2022 7:25:00 AM
Beautiful. Very nice :)
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Date: 10/30/2022 7:44:00 AM
Thank you very much for the encouraging words.

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