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Ants With Flaws - Flawless Spray

Flaws The bugspray was very reliant. It covered the ants all compliant. They nested all day then came out to play. Mutations had turned them to giants. Flawless It turns out the spray was not lethal. The ants drank it all and were gleeful. They danced and they played. And most of them stayed, where they could be sure of a refill!!! Written for SKAT's Flawless vs' Flaws contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/23/2011 5:25:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Jimmy, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:14:00 PM
Jimmy, I just love this one. One of the best metered limericks I have seen lately.LUv, Andrea (a 7 rating!)
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Date: 2/5/2011 5:04:00 AM
Many congratulations Jimmy on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:15:00 PM
Very funny Jimmy. Should have been in a higher spot. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:37:00 PM
You must be describing the Zanti misfits from the original Outer Limits in these two limericks. Each one is written quite well. Congratulations on winning with them.
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:25:00 PM
So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle, Jimmy, well done!! Congratulations! love Carrie
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:40:00 AM
LOL! This is funny and so true. Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Jimmy. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations onn the well deserved win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 2/4/2011 8:37:00 AM
lol! Good one, Jimmy. Congrats on your well deserved win. Lainie
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Date: 2/4/2011 7:07:00 AM
really good one.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:51:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write ... enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:48:00 AM
Great, great limerick! So funny, and so true; exactly what a limerick should be. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:04:00 PM
wow, Jimmy, I think you are a limerick master!! Very good entires. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:30:00 PM
A perfect personification of Ants with flaws facing flawless spray, Jimmy
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:10:00 PM
LoL! great image you captured here.. hilarious...and they are smart enough to have done this too. Reminds me of that animated movie in the '90s, "Ants"! Best of luck in the contest! Love, Audrey
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Date: 1/20/2011 1:46:00 PM
Very funny poem, Jimmy! So glad to see you entering and winning so many contests. This is certainly a winner in my book. Love, "Sis"
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Date: 1/20/2011 12:59:00 PM
Oh this is so funny! best of luck in the contest Jimmy..love,Deb
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