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All In Curl

give it away give it all all for what all for nothing nothing you bet nothing yil get get out there quick get lost in a ditch ditch ya wife ditch ya dog dog won’t miss ya dog'll piss ya ya think yiv got it down ya haven’t been down under under what ya say? under what ya pray? pray it ain't worth a zack pray your honey aint outback outback’n the wild roo’s nestin’ kick outback and back again he’s slick slick and kicking for a noice steak slick and mad as a cut snake snake’s got death in his bite snake’ll ruin a weddin orright orright’cha got two seconds tah think orright your seconds gone yeh in a stink stink in heaps stink the dunny rat he is is you thinking in the wild to slack off is you ready to rack off off to the waters in a hurray mate off to the sandy slates run clean clean as a bottler at sea clean as ya ever can see see here we all left our lives see this is where we feel alive alive in the wild far from the loo alive away from the crazy blue blue sea soppin the sand around blue surroundin this land we’re proud proud in the danger of ever proud to amaze whoever whoever ya meet whoever ya see see chance give it a burl see um tackle the crock in a curl curl on his back is a good going off curl in his teeth yiv gotcha limb torn off off! off! For the Down Under contest Sponsored by: Debbie Guzzi *Don’t think I did this quite right! Though it was fun to try anyhow ^___^

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Date: 3/24/2016 1:33:00 AM
You really have been reading me a lot lately, and I really appreciate it. Some of my older poems (and recent, too) can get a bit on the silly side --- (especially that Sitting Awkwardly So They Don't See the Evidence one ... ha ha) ... but you give your thoughts nonetheless. You're awesome my friend ... and your bro is also really kind.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/24/2016 9:09:00 AM
Because I really enjoy reading you!!! Haha, yeah my brother David was online, and I asked him, hey, do you know who Timothy Hicks is? Read his poetry!!! Haha He knew about you already apparently. You're simply brilliant Timothy, sorry if I keep repeating that. xD Also, we all need a bit of comic relief sometimes, so its all good. I look forward to reading more from you. Youve been on my faviritw poets list for quite some time! ~Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/24/2016 9:09:00 AM
favorite* I cant spell this morning... x.x
Date: 3/24/2016 1:31:00 AM
Ohhh I really love this form, and have tried it a few times. You never know where you'll end up and that's the fun of it :) This was not what I was expecting with all the funny slang and unusual images ... I found myself reading this in an Australian (well sort of) accent ... different indeed from your usual muse, but different is refreshing. I also didn't try very many rhymes at all with this form (only a couple here and there if they came to me) ...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/24/2016 9:03:00 AM
I dunno what possessed me to try this, but it was fun to write nonetheless! I will have to check out your blitzes soon! ~Laura
Date: 9/12/2015 8:57:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2015 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Sara! ~Laura
Date: 9/11/2015 11:34:00 PM
Wow...for a first time, you really nailed this blitz my friend, Aussie accent and all. Congrats! hugs!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/12/2015 1:37:00 PM
Aww, thanks Kim! I had fun writing this silly piece. ~Laura
Date: 9/8/2015 5:38:00 PM
Now that's what I call a "down under" blitz! Great work, Laura! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/9/2015 5:14:00 AM
Thanks for the sweet visit,: ) ~Laura
Date: 9/8/2015 3:15:00 PM
Slammy and witty blitz, Laura! Makes for an entertaining read:) ~ Congratulations on a merited podium finish! // paul
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/8/2015 3:28:00 PM
Glad you were entertained, Paul! I'm heading over to your page to read some of your poetry. I'm excited! ~Laura
Date: 9/8/2015 11:55:00 AM
Hooray for you.........you blitzed the winner's list !!!! :) Congrats !!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/8/2015 3:13:00 PM
Good on me, huh? Thanks for the cheer. : ) ~Laura
Date: 9/8/2015 8:54:00 AM
Laura, Congratulations on your -Down Under- win. Love .....SKAT**
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/8/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thank ya kindly mate! ~Laura
Date: 9/7/2015 6:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/7/2015 7:18:00 PM
Hello Eve, thank you for reading!~Laura
Date: 9/7/2015 5:54:00 AM
Debbie Congrats on your wonderful win! Balveen
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/7/2015 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Balveen! Gotter watch out for those gators!~Laura
Date: 9/6/2015 11:25:00 PM
Wow Laura great write so well placed high! Big congrats!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/7/2015 6:01:00 AM
Thanks Dr.Upma!! This was really fun to write.~Laura
Date: 9/6/2015 11:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your off-beat write... congrats for a Big win... Cheers, Bobby
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/7/2015 6:01:00 AM
hello, Anindya... thanks..tried to sound as Aussie as possible! Glad you enjoyed.~Laura
Date: 9/6/2015 8:53:00 PM
Nice to meet you Laura! Congrad's on doing it "your way" I always award creativity. Now do try another with shorter lines ;) Light & Love
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 9/6/2015 10:14:00 PM
Thanks Debbie! Yeah, I might try doing it again sometime! : D ~Laura
Date: 8/12/2015 8:36:00 PM
You did good. You sound like you are from a distant land and not at all like usual.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/12/2015 9:15:00 PM
Awwh, well thanks mate! it was supposed to be aussie as possible hehee ~Laura
Date: 8/12/2015 1:02:00 AM
well, right or wrong. It looks like you had GREAT fun trying it. (I am shaking in my boots to do one!!)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/12/2015 1:20:00 AM
yessum, great fun! Do it do it do it! ~Laura
Date: 8/9/2015 8:07:00 PM
Ya done did it RIGHT! Huzzah! ain't it fun once you let go of the controls and let your subconscious take over! Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/12/2015 9:03:00 PM
3 word title 2nd word preposition or conjunction
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/9/2015 9:09:00 PM
Haha!! Thanks so much! It was really a treat to try it out!! Thank you for the smiles! ~Laura
Date: 8/8/2015 7:01:00 PM
This blitz is a good blend of slam and slang, and it displays your diversity as a truly great Poetess...xool poem about keepin whatchya got Laura...J.A.B.
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/9/2015 12:17:00 AM
This was fun to write... you're sweet! Aaaaaannd, I have read your marvelous new poem. I will find words...soon. ;) haha. Love ya lots! ~Laura

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