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A Romantic Endeavor

His alarm failed, so no time to be pedantic He still tried in his haste to be romantic He had to hurry he was late And in such an absent state He slammed his wife and kissed the door, when frantic!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/26/2017 8:12:00 AM
Lol! I can actually picture it even without the photo!!
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Pat Adams
Date: 11/26/2017 11:31:00 AM
Glad you liked it Dale!...Thanks for commenting......Patrick
Date: 11/25/2017 11:37:00 PM
Lol! Very good pat, I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:58:00 PM
Thank you for commenting and I'm really glad you liked it!..........Have a good one..........pat
Date: 11/25/2017 8:25:00 PM
Hi Pat, that was funny. To tell you the truth you started me laughing at the romantic pedantic... somehow that image was a huge leap of imagination for me. Well done, Pat.
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:56:00 PM
I love that. It makes me feel so good to know it brought a smile. I hope you smile a lot every day!!! Have a nice night Line..............xx............Pat
Date: 11/25/2017 7:38:00 PM
OUCH in more ways than one Pat!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:55:00 PM
Ahh....what ya gonna do???........thanks for commenting....x..pat

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