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09.10.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Silhouettes in black and white the players have attacked Thoroughly worked out (?) - harmful influence From tongues unrestrained How many thistles are required to justify guilt Organic intelligence or artificial intelligence The dust swirls in the air ...

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Date: 10/10/2023 2:07:00 AM
Fortunately, I know nothing about AI and I don't wish to know. Poetry comes from the heart. Blessings.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2023 2:18:00 AM
- Thanks, Victor :) - hugs
Date: 10/9/2023 9:03:00 PM
The battle of the century, organic or AI. What will we find when the dust settles?.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2023 1:10:00 AM
- A scary thought, Jerry - Living people with dead brains (?) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Date: 10/9/2023 12:38:00 PM
indeed, Anne-Lise, the dust swirls when guilt, etc., is involved. May you have an outstanding afternoon, Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 12:43:00 PM
- The same to you, Sara ... many thanks :) - hugs
Date: 10/9/2023 12:19:00 PM
What a write/picture. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 12:30:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Date: 10/9/2023 11:21:00 AM
I guess it was all due to the fact that poets have been blocked by someone who came back spouting peace and that he had changed . there are plenty here who can see through the facade Anne-lise. hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/9/2023 11:48:00 AM
Good on you for not getting involved Anne-Lise. Sadly things will never change on here, after 7 or 8 accounts he will never stop the belittling and bullying and amending his comments to suit. hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 11:32:00 AM
- Dear Jan, I look and I read ... but, I'm tired of wiping dust ... 12 years at the "soup school" has taught me a lot .... sorry .. but I don't choose a side ... I'm just embarrassed ... - Enjoy your week :) - hugs
Date: 10/9/2023 9:54:00 AM
I think it's going to be a debate for a long time. I've said my piece. Back to writing poetry. Have a great week
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/9/2023 10:09:00 AM
- I am not a judge or a peacemaker ... I'm embarrassed ... grown people ... - Write poems ... that's why we're here - Enjoy your week -

Book: Shattered Sighs