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I lost my wedding rings never to be found again....I didn't realize how much I'd miss them until they were gone.

a sad complaint song no emergency signal - lost the wedding ring 18.03.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Writing Challenge 3 - Senryu Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart 2nd place in the contest

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Date: 3/25/2019 8:33:00 AM
I've lost our original wedding ring years ago. Can relate to this sadness. Well done
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Date: 3/25/2019 8:37:00 AM
- The original can never be replaced by a new one, Allen - Many thanks for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2019 6:47:00 PM
Sad day when the rings get lost. I recently lost the diamond out of my engagement ring. I went many months without my ring before my husband replaced it. I had an attachment to my original stone but I have had to accept that It is gone. Thanks for the visit to my page. This one reads like a good contender for the contest. Sara
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Date: 3/24/2019 8:43:00 AM
- Sad to lose - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2019 3:13:00 AM
Anne-Lise dear soul sister, congratulations on your very fine win - your wonderful poetic words are so full of sadness! Hugs and love Anne-Lise, Jenny
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Date: 3/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
- Many thanks, soul sister for your friendly visit, comment and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2019 7:04:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/22/2019 7:45:00 AM
- Many thanks for congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2019 4:48:00 PM
Anne-Line, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Senryu and I love the image too ~
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Date: 3/22/2019 7:46:00 AM
- Many thanks for my 2nd place in your great contest, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2019 3:03:00 PM
These things do happen, Anne-Lise; pleased to read that you haven't lost yours! Congratulations on your podium finish. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/22/2019 7:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for your friendly visit, comment and congratulations Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2019 6:35:00 AM
I like this sad little song. Early in my marriage, after I had taken a shower, I was sitting in my chair and went to play with my ring and it was gone! A sinking feeling... Thankfully I found it in the shower.
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Date: 3/20/2019 9:03:00 AM
- Glad it was found ... sad to lose, Kim :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2019 10:26:00 AM
It happens sometimes and how disheartening that can be, Nice senryu dear, have a great day hugs
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Date: 3/20/2019 9:01:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2019 9:49:00 AM
One thing for sure, you have not lost your poetic diamonds!
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Date: 3/19/2019 9:56:00 AM
- Many thanks Chuck, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2019 1:08:00 AM
We went out to buy a replacement ring once, after I could not stop crying. When we returned the babysitter had my "real" ring. The four year old had taken it off me when I fell asleep with her at nap time. Ha! Lovely senryu that reminded me of a great ending to a sad night, where I could find nothing else I wanted.
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Date: 3/19/2019 4:46:00 AM
- So glad you found it, Caren :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 2:22:00 PM
Great Senryu, Sunshine, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 3/18/2019 3:11:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 1:33:00 PM
go find it, anne... a sentimental write remarkably scribed!...happy huggs
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Date: 3/18/2019 3:11:00 PM
- Many thanks Nette, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 12:07:00 PM
Sad but too often this really happens. Sometimes it has to be replaced because it's never found again. Hope you get yours back. God Bless, JB
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:54:00 PM
- Yes, it certainly happens ... it would not be the same with a new one - Many thanks Judy, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 10:48:00 AM
Uh oh, I hope you found it again. Best of luck in doing so.
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:50:00 PM
- This is just imagination, M.L. ... it is still on my finger :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 7:37:00 AM
Hope this is isn't true, very sad, Anne..
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:47:00 PM
- No, I haven't lost my wedding ring Jo :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 7:13:00 AM
But the memories live on..never lost.
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:46:00 PM
- We have the memories ... it's true, Vijay :) - But, sad to lose a wedding ring ... luckily I have not lost mine :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 4:13:00 AM
How sad indeed Anne Lise, I've not worn my wedding ring since my fall in April, we tried to get it back on on Valentines Day but its still too uncomfy to wear. I will leave it a year like the physio said but may have to get it re sized ... I guess until then I'm a 'free' woman lol lol:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:41:00 PM
- Mine is not lost, Jan ... I have it on my finger :) - Sad you can not use yours ... you can have it on a chain around your neck :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/18/2019 3:54:00 AM
Sad but so artfully done dearest, Anne-Lise! Good luck my friend! Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/18/2019 2:36:00 PM
- Many thanks for your visit and comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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