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- Haiku X 90 - Heartbroken -

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sad, boy, upset, emo

Random thoughts flitted You were my whole foundation And I was a fool - howmanysyllables.com Haiku 5-7-5 - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) 12.06.2016 - Copyright © All Rights Reserved - Published in the newspaper 29.06.2016

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Vladislav Raven
Date: 8/14/2016 2:28:00 PM
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Hi Anne-Lise, i had to drop by one of your amazing Haiku today. It is a sad Haiky, but as always it is an excellent Haiku. Excellent content and well writeen as always. This is a seven and a fave Anne-Lise. I always love your well thought out Haiku. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/14/2016 2:36:00 PM
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- ............ and it is always a pleasure to see you, Mike - Thanks for lovely visits a 7 + fav. and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 6/17/2016 1:19:00 AM
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Sad, But well written:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/29/2016 8:24:00 AM
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- Thank you, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 6/14/2016 5:09:00 PM
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Wonderfully done my lovely lovely friend. Good luck with a 7 in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/15/2016 1:16:00 PM
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- Thank you my friend, bL :) - (Not for contest) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 6/13/2016 6:09:00 PM
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Dear Anne-Lise, Very powerfully expressed. We are all fools at one time or another in our respective lives. Enjoyed your Haiku here!! "TR" -- Best Always, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/14/2016 7:41:00 AM
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- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 6/13/2016 12:41:00 PM
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from being the foundation to a fool... lovely transition and a greeat 'ku, anne.. happy day and huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 12:53:00 PM
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- Thank you my friend, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 6/13/2016 11:39:00 AM
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true....
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 11:41:00 AM
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- Thank you my friend, Lenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 6/13/2016 9:09:00 AM
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Many play the fool for they do not know what they have until it is gone... lovely
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 9:25:00 AM
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- So true, Tim - Thank you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 6/13/2016 8:47:00 AM
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Excellent poem, thanks for posting........A.M.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 9:26:00 AM
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- Thank you my friend, Afolabi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/13/2016 7:53:00 AM
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Absolutely brilliant! No matter if you were a fool for now you are wise dear, Anne-Lise!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 8:34:00 AM
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- Thank you my friend, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Garth von Buchholz
Date: 6/13/2016 2:38:00 AM
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Very direct and powerful.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 7:47:00 AM
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- Straight talk :) - Thank you Garth von Buchholz :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/12/2016 5:16:00 PM
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very well done, Sunshine.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 7:46:00 AM
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- Thank you my friend, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jean Murray
Date: 6/12/2016 5:01:00 PM
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"Defination of love? A misunderstanding between two fools." Lovely Haiku.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 7:46:00 AM
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- Maybe, maybe not :) - Thank you my friend, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/12/2016 3:03:00 PM
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Oh so sad a poem Anne Lise - am sure many a youngster can relate:-( hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/13/2016 7:44:00 AM
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- Thank you my friend, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/12/2016 2:22:00 PM
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Teens turn to the wrong foundation sometimes..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 2:35:00 PM
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- School of life, thank you Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/12/2016 1:38:00 PM
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Oh....this is a sad write, my dear Sunshine. Very well written though. Sending you hugs.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/12/2016 2:03:00 PM
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- Thank you my friend, Eileen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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