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Poetic Form: Dramatic Verse
Inspired; 2024 April 17

 

*2nd Place*
Yellow, Yearn, Yet, Yesterday Words
Contest Judged: 2024 April 19
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

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"Aniticipation: Are We There Yet," ... by the NET, (?) ... by the Poet. Yet,
for the greater good, the ills of society must take center stage and be fully addressed and understood by society as a whole,
yet,
societal issues become noticeable whenever a vague or ambiguous point that seldom surfaces becomes relevant to society, thus be acknowledged,
yet,
if society precludes its relevancy to the surface by its regular usage whereby society's commonality to it as being an inclusionary entity, thus, vague turns common, precludes evolves includes,
yet,
knowingly there'll be a few exceptions, reasonable or naught, is truly the point that defines society as a whole, by living side-by-side,
yet,
living with choices.

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Date: 4/22/2024 6:07:00 AM
Hilo, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative poem, very interesting, Constance
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Date: 4/22/2024 6:16:00 AM
A couple of flicks of what I thought was a passe concept, both foreign eng-subs, so guessing they do it there, eh. Thanks, Constance, pleasure as always, Aloha, William
Date: 4/21/2024 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very creative. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Sara K
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Date: 4/21/2024 8:16:00 AM
I appreciate your extended niceties, Sara. Have a fine day, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 4/19/2024 12:31:00 PM
- A great and unique poem, William :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/19/2024 1:00:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise, YET its presence I anticipate it to be as you've described, my friend. Aloha, William
Date: 4/19/2024 10:44:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative "Yet" write. Have a great weekend with your win......................
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Date: 4/19/2024 10:59:00 AM
Thanks, Paula, and as the weekend has YET to be, I anticipate it to be great. Aloha, William
Date: 4/17/2024 8:27:00 AM
Your structure is so original. Loved the way you put yet alone and in line downwards. Guess this is for the contest, for which I wish you the best.
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Date: 4/17/2024 10:51:00 AM
Your 'guess', Victor, is well founded, and your encouragement and words of noted highlights, are welcoming, my friend. Aloha, William

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