Yellow

Youthful love erupts, Embracing all rational thoughts, Lurking during times when it is not sought. Longing in its euphoria, the heat smiles. Overflowing with giddiness, you laugh at its whiles. Wondrous is young love, for with it, the world brightens. +++ October 7, 2014 Form: Acrostic

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Mark Trichet

Date: 10/10/2014 5:37:00 PM

Loved where you took this Dr. enjoyed reading it very much. Congrats

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/9/2014 8:47:00 AM

Love really does overflow with giddiness. I love that line. Congratulations on your win Dr. Mehta.

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/9/2014 8:35:00 AM

Hi Dr. Mehta, Nice bright yellow world. Nice win. Have a pleasant day. Earl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2014 6:33:00 AM

- Congrats with your winning poem in the contest, Dr. Ram - A pleasure to read it again - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Hija De La Luna

Date: 10/8/2014 10:15:00 PM

yellow blooms! love this! Congratulations, Dr. Ram!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/8/2014 9:03:00 PM

The sun is yellow and radiant. Congratulations on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/8/2014 4:14:00 PM

Nothing like young love, I think I remember...lol. Congrats Dr...BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2014 4:10:00 PM

Yellow like gold. That is when love is so bright and happy! Congrats for the win, Dr. Ram.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 10:54:00 AM

dropping back with my congratulations Dr Mehta:-) hugs Jan xx

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/8/2014 8:56:00 AM

Yeah u r right, young premarital love is euphoric, unsteady fickle and unreliable too. Yor poem is constructed in impressive wording and poetry devices. Regards Doc.