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Winter Dreams

rose bush starkly bare snowflakes shimmer on branches roots dream thrilling days January 16, 2022 "Winter Haiku" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania kitchin Syllables (5-7-5) checked by HMS.com SECOND PLACE A Brian Strand Hiku Poetry Contest FIRST PLACE

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/22/2022 9:04:00 AM

Good one. I enjoyed reading this winner today. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/18/2022 12:28:00 PM

A lovely haiku, Mala! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 4:38:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Really appreciate your sweet comment.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 1/18/2022 9:41:00 AM

This is such a beautiful winter Haiku that you have created dear Mala...creative and thoughtful with great imagery...Hugs...~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 4:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anitha. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/18/2022 5:19:00 AM

Lovely Mala and congratulations on your win! Blessings,Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 4:36:00 PM

Thanks, Paulette. Really appreciate your comment.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/17/2022 7:22:00 PM

Beautifully written haiku, Malabika! I really enjoyed this one. Congrats on your win! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/19/2022 7:03:00 AM

Thanks, Laura. Really appreciate your lovely comment.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/17/2022 2:13:00 PM

Your final line, Malabika, is a grand, startling contrast to the first image. Creative + original Haiku. Congratulations! Brian

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 4:36:00 PM

Thank you, Brian. Really appreciate your inspiring comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2022 11:55:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations ... a clear winner, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/18/2022 4:35:00 PM

Thanks, Dear Poet. Appreciate your comment.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/17/2022 9:21:00 AM

Oh Mala, I love this visually stunning haiku with its promise of "brighter days" in the middle of winter - life just waiting to spring back! This is a fav for me! Congratulations dear friend! Sending you blessings and hugs.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/17/2022 9:45:00 AM

Dear Sam, really appreciate your kind comment. Your Fave?!!! That is exciting!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/17/2022 9:01:00 AM

Hi Mala, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day-Alexis

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/17/2022 9:44:00 AM

Thanks, Alexis, really appreciate your kind comment.