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I lay in my frozen bed, teeth ruthlessly chattering. Intense darkness made me rise and stretch a bit. The useless coverlet hardly warmed my shoulders, As from outside thunder boomed and rattled panes. An electric storm evolved into terrible lightening, Flashes that threatened destruction, yet I looked out. Icicles hung along the wires and ledges all around. Down below the bora-like gale even uprooted some trees. Not a vehicle was in sight, all returned to their homes. But what is home without heat? Might as well try an igloo. It’s warmer and full of shelter there I’m sure.

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Date: 1/16/2021 3:24:00 AM
Winter blue imagery well created Victor with a nice picture too ... ~ Ani
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Date: 1/15/2021 11:33:00 PM
WoW! That's some pic here Victor. Very nice. It sounds like you are experiencing a hurricane in this one. Excellent expression and imagery. As always a fine read. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/15/2021 1:20:00 AM
Brr I could feel winters chill in your verse Victor. They say we might get a beast from the east or a snow bomb very soon. Tom
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Date: 1/14/2021 10:55:00 PM
I thought it was warm where you live.. I wonder how an igloo would keep anybody warm. Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/14/2021 11:02:00 PM
Cold and humid.
Date: 1/14/2021 2:47:00 PM
I feel the blues. Wonderfully described, as always, Victor. Must be really cold if igloo is warmer.
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Date: 1/14/2021 2:11:00 PM
Love the visuals my friend i could feel the cold. well done. pete.
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Date: 1/14/2021 1:35:00 PM
A home without heat. Oh my !! I would cover up and stay still. You paint such vivid images with your words. I hope you are doing well my dear friend. Staying warm. Soon, Spring will be here. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/14/2021 1:00:00 PM
- Or do as the bear ... :) - Stay warm, my friend Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/14/2021 12:38:00 PM
vivid imagery Victor, I guess with suitable clothing a igloo could be surprisingly warm:-) hugs jan xx
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