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Who Is Your Neighbor- For Contest

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I espied him in his designer suit Such a looker, he’s REALLY cute This morning he waved and shot me a grin Oh how I would love a date with him Think I’ve managed to catch his eye Got my heart set on a handsome guy I knocked on his door …he was wearing a dress I just stood there gawking I must confess! Just who is my neighbour - I’m not so sure But any dream of romance was premature! Contest Who is my Neighbour Sponsor Mystic Rose 09~03~15

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Old Buck

Date: 10/13/2015 3:15:00 PM

Just browsing through one of my favorite writers works when I was fortunate to stop here. Well Done Jan. oldbuck

Jan Allison
Date: 10/13/2015 3:21:00 PM

Aww thanks Old Buck always a pleasure to have you stop by:-) hugs Jan xx

Fred Chitanga

Date: 10/4/2015 12:24:00 PM

I thought i knew where it was heading till the part where you knocked on the door ... Hilarious

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2015 12:28:00 PM

I love to write with humour whenever I can Fred:-) hugs jan xx

Bill Lindsay

Date: 9/16/2015 10:38:00 AM

made me smile ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/18/2015 8:31:00 AM

Thanks Bill:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman

Date: 9/15/2015 8:51:00 PM

Funny, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/16/2015 2:49:00 AM

Thanks James I do try to male people smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/15/2015 6:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win Jan. Really a cute write.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2015 6:32:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Tammy:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/14/2015 10:01:00 PM

A truly entertaining write, Jan! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/15/2015 1:04:00 AM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/14/2015 4:08:00 PM

Such a cute, funny neighbor poem with an unexpected twist, Jan! Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 4:10:00 PM

Thanks Sandra just a fun write thankfully it has never happened to me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2015 3:24:00 PM

BIG congrats and so well deserved.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 3:26:00 PM

your poem was ace weel done:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/14/2015 1:51:00 PM

Back to congratulate you on your win Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 1:55:00 PM

Many thanks Eve for all your support:-) hugs jan xx

Skat A

Date: 9/14/2015 1:24:00 PM

Jan, Congrats on your, Who Is Your Neighbor win! SKAT

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 1:34:00 PM

Thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/14/2015 11:28:00 AM

lol! Huge smile on my face even as I type this Jan. Congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 11:30:00 AM

LOl Thanks Kim I had fun with this:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/14/2015 7:44:00 AM

Jan, Congratulations on your win it was well deserved:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2015 10:43:00 AM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Anu Nayak

Date: 9/13/2015 9:37:00 AM

DEAR Jan, wow! hahaha i enjoyed...what an imagery!you are awesome Jan! a 7!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2015 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Anu just a fun write for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 9/8/2015 8:40:00 PM

You are so good, another winner. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2015 1:08:00 AM

I write for fun Eve if I win its great as long as I get some reads I am happy:-) hugs jan xx

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/8/2015 6:23:00 PM

And so the mind wanders. It's a real incite into the human brain--the way you write. Some of us have a very active fantasy life and seeing someone attractive sets off a whole lot of noise. It is just too funny.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2015 1:07:00 AM

Thanks Duke:-) hugs jan xx

Richard D Seal

Date: 9/6/2015 6:13:00 PM

That grin was probably in admiration of what you were wearing Jan lol. Good luck in the contest. Take care, Richard

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2015 1:06:00 AM

Pure fiction write Richard - you never know what happens behind closed doors though:-) hugs jan xx

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/4/2015 12:53:00 PM

Ha ha you had me laughing envisioning the this scene. Wonderful funny poem. love phyl

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2015 1:09:00 PM

Oh I can just imagine it Phyllis lol - not sure if it will be what Vienna is after for the contest but I have to go with the flow of my pen:-) hugs jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/3/2015 11:59:00 PM

U rock with this one Jan, well hope sets the mark! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2015 12:11:00 AM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2015 9:55:00 PM

hahaha. YOu are on a ROLLLL

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2015 12:10:00 AM

Not sure if Vienna is after humour but I have to go with my muse! hugs Jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 9/3/2015 8:04:00 PM

Lol, so hilarious. I enjoyed!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/4/2015 12:10:00 AM

Thanks Njeri:-) hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/3/2015 3:48:00 PM

Hum!!!! I love the flow of this write and the beautiful imagery......gOOd luCK in the contest......always love Jan.......A.M.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 4:08:00 PM

Thanks Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/3/2015 3:05:00 PM

A regular J Edgar Hoover tale! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 3:06:00 PM

Thanks Matthew:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 9/3/2015 2:20:00 PM

I'm finding you have a deep sense of humor..You are from the land of Benny Hill...good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 2:22:00 PM

I have tried to write with humour whenever I can Frederic:-) If I can make someone smile with my words that makes me happy :-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2015 1:33:00 PM

Jan, this is HILARIOUS for the contest, delightful, yes nowadays we girls don't know , they look so normal.... and thanks for visiting my poem, through the eyes . . . ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 1:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/3/2015 12:38:00 PM

- No one knows what happens behind closed doors :))) - Love it, Jan :)- I wish you good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/3/2015 1:37:00 PM

I'm not sure if it's what Vienna is after but I have to go with the flow of my pen and its in humourous mood:-) hugs Jan xx