White

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This is a series on the topic "White" I will cover all emotions all spectrums of color in a way, the series will be posted here with the final poem posted on Instagram. Even I am not sure where it all ends, that's the fun! I do know there will many layers within layers.

Black is not white Nor is it black or white Ask any purple Zebra He will explain so colorfully Illustrating the life and love Of a dancing Gothic chicken Around a lake of make-believe dreams Steam punk trains On the tracks of time Tickets available At yesterdays window

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Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/22/2018 7:15:00 PM

Especially love those last three lines. Fabulous write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2018 7:20:00 PM

so surreal, Arthur, but I'm still wondering how white can't be black OR white. tee hee.

Sara Ella

Date: 1/16/2018 7:33:00 PM

This is full of imagery, Art :) Looking forward to the next one!

Jean Murray

Date: 1/16/2018 5:58:00 PM

I'm with Jan on this one Art.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 1/16/2018 5:55:00 PM

Hey Arthur. Just read your poem. I saw An outstanding display of superb Craftsmanship. Read you later. VB Rogers

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2018 4:02:00 PM

What is the purple zebra's second color. Or in this case is it just a woman named Ze's Purple Brassiere?? I enjoyed your poem Arthur.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2018 6:05:00 AM

When i saw the title i wondered if you were writing a tribute to Darren - how wrong can a gal be lol. Those mystic mushrooms really have taken a hold lol love fun poem the imagery is dare i say it bizarre lol:-) hugs jan xx