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sunny day to play here comes the wind and cold rain play is now over Date Written: 6/24/2022 How Many Syllables 5 Place Summer Nature Themed HaikuContest Judged: 7/3/2022 Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/20/2022 1:24:00 PM

It all comes to a halt!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2022 11:04:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this weather write. Rain comes and play is all gone. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/13/2022 4:14:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Paula. :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2022 11:17:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my weather fun write. Rain can ruin a day at play. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/8/2022 3:07:00 AM

Whoa!! Children and parent/s trapped. Put on mom's creative hat. I remember those days. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/8/2022 8:16:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this weather write. Yes, mom put on your very creative hat or the kids will drive you crazy. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Len Gasun

Date: 7/5/2022 7:13:00 AM

Wow! Same weather here my dear friend Paula. I love both sunshine and rain and your marvelous haiku. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. God bless you. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2022 10:26:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. I also love both the sunshine and the rain. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2022 4:55:00 PM

Back with my congrats on your cute Ku

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2022 10:25:00 AM

Great you came back for another visit. Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/4/2022 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Paula. Your lovely haiku reminds me of childhood and singing the 'rain, rain, go away' song. Blessings :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/6/2022 10:23:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my weather haiku write. Let's go singing the in rain. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/4/2022 8:00:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2022 8:18:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like my weather haiku write. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/4/2022 4:57:00 AM

Great description. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2022 7:57:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with this fun weather write. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/27/2022 5:51:00 AM

Sounds very much like the weather here, we can get three seasons in one day...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 2:55:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. The weather changes so very fast. Oh My!!!!! Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2022 12:36:00 PM

made me think of Washington state where I used to live. We'd head for the beach when I was really little and then the clouds would come out and we never got to enjoy the day

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2022 2:54:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Tooooo bad about your beach days. The rain comes in and then we leave. Oh My!! Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Howard Kerr

Date: 6/26/2022 9:37:00 AM

Hello Paula, Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your recent soupmail re Son And Heir result. Your comment is truly valued by me. weather is a majestic haiku with a superb arch. Best of luck with it Warmth Howard

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2022 10:21:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my weather Haiku write. Have a great/blessed~~day/week writing away............

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/26/2022 1:49:00 AM

Can be a spoil sport the weather, Paula, you say it all here, nice haiku, love it.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2022 7:56:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love my Haiku weather write. The rain can mess up the kids playtime. Hope you are OK. Have a great/blessed day............

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/25/2022 10:46:00 AM

A lovely day out with sushine then game over. A fine poem in brevity. Thumbs up. ^^^^^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~ Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2022 1:35:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this weather write. The sun is now gone and the rain is here. The rain will mess up the kids playtime. Have a great/blessed weekend............

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/25/2022 8:03:00 AM

It sounds like here, when weather changes in minutes! Good one :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2022 1:34:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, the weather can change in a minute. Have a great/blessed weekend............

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/25/2022 5:10:00 AM

Nicely penned Haiku, Paula. Rain is always messing with kids' play plans. Have a great weekend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/25/2022 1:32:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this Haiku weather write. Yes, the rain will always mess up the kids playtime. Have a great/blessed weekend............