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ways of breathing

Winter's rehearsal seen in late Autumn, white flush of sensations aired — voice sang, caught on her drift...

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Date: 12/20/2024 10:44:00 PM
Excellent kimo. I particularly love ypur first line. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 12/17/2024 6:18:00 PM
Dear Paige, your creative imagery enthralls my imagination and captures the seasonal transition from autumn to winter with golden poetic finesse. Every line is simply splendid! Great title too! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/16/2024 10:43:00 AM
Bite sized beauty in striking images, Paige! Enjoyed it very much! You wrote this form so skillfully. Blessings of the season to you.
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Date: 12/16/2024 9:40:00 AM
Cleve word weaving... You did this form very well..
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Date: 12/15/2024 11:06:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem. Great imagery.
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Date: 12/15/2024 8:27:00 AM
Excellent imagery! Thanks for taking my poems the other day
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Date: 12/14/2024 10:59:00 PM
Lovely kimo. A superlative bite-size poem. Victor
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