Vasava - An Untold Story 8/Many

Vasava 
An untold Story ………                                                  8/Many 


By the sweetness of her melodious voice and singing
Vasava enthralled everyone, who was present there
By her enchanting prayer, always first devoted to Goddess Saraswati*
And the mob swept away, by the enchanting ness of her prayer* only 
She sang that day before starting her Ragas* and dances

The over joyous citizens of the Kingdom’s of Magadh
Were expressing their happiness by singing and dancing
And everyone was celebrating Vijayadesmi*, with King’s birthday
While keeping the most cherished desire to see at least once in a year
Everyone’s favorite and dream queen the dancer Vasava 

Lord Rama* had sacrificed his throne, 
To honor the words of his father and
To serve the views and feelings of his subject
To show his respect and love for his people 
And to bring prosperity for the people of Bharat (India)

The presence of king Udiyan in the ceremony
Had made the occasion more charming and attractive
To see only a glimpse of this handsome King of Ujjain


Ravindra 

Kanpur India  18th March 2010                                  to continue in 8

•Lord Rama*	                Lord Rama is one of the most commonly adored gods  
                                                of Hindus and is known as an ideal man and hero of the     
                                                epic Ramayana 
*Ragas                                     A Raag is a beautiful combination of musical notes that is 
                                                pleasing to the ears when sung or played on a musical
                                                instrument.
•Translation of 
Saraswati’s Prayer
Mantra                                       O’ Goddess Saraswati. You who are adore with the 
                                                 Garlands of Kumadini, and who is dressed with 
                                                white dresses, which shine like the Moon and snow,
                                                who is beautifying with the Veena in her hand, and 
                                                who always sits on the lotus seat, who is worshiped
                                                by the Brahma & indestructible God Shankara,
                                                That goddess Saraswati may kindly shower Her 
                                                blessings and spell away all ignorance and inertness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/19/2010 6:39:00 PM
A fantastic love story brewing in your words... .. Vasava would be someone I would want to make her acquaintance and friendship.. she seems exotic and charismatic as your lovely lines of poetry Ravindra.. such a special talent and unique story .. I cannot wait to read more of the series.. thankxxx and please let me know when u post the next segment.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:06:00 AM
ok, let me see, is she going to maybe fall in love with this handsome king of Ujjain? As you can see, I am a hopeless romantic and am wanting your dancer to finally fall in love! YOu write beautifully the folklore of your country! lUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/19/2010 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Ravindra.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/18/2010 11:04:00 AM
Interesting write about your beliefs...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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