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Valentine Promises

Poor Max got himself in quite a fix Sent the same card to more than one chick His promises to wed To disaster they led His sad story now out on Net Flicks

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Margeret Bailey

Date: 2/2/2011 5:44:00 PM

Very funny! Nice write.

James Fraser

Date: 1/27/2011 2:27:00 PM

Many congrats Barbara on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2011 9:37:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2011 4:09:00 PM

lol! Congrat's on your big win, Barb. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 1/26/2011 8:57:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your worthy poem's honored Place. Agape, Moses

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/26/2011 8:14:00 AM

Hi Barbara - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2011 10:24:00 PM

Really a delightful limerick Barbara. Copngratulations. Love, joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 9:55:00 PM

Yours was one of the funniest stories told in this contest. Very imaginative, Barbara. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 7:36:00 PM

Congrats BG on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest .. enjoy another chart topping poem with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/25/2011 6:17:00 PM

congrats on your sixth place win in my Valentines day contest

Elaine George

Date: 1/24/2011 8:33:00 PM

Good one, Barbara, Lainie.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 2:24:00 PM

Oh, you funny, funny lady! When I first started dating my late husband, he had 3 girlfriends and bought each of us the same gift for Christmas. I asked him if they were cheaper by the dozen. Maybe Max got a discount for a lare order. But shame on him for the promises to wed. He deserves to be on Net Flicks. Definitely a winner you have hear, dear LNC. We leave for Tallahassee in the morning - picking up DaneAnn on the way. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/22/2011 6:30:00 PM

Super BG .. original and unique luv.. good luck in the contest.. Net Flix does get everything first nowadays...good one..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 3:02:00 PM

ahhaha, this is clever. Love Net Flicks line!