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Valentine Haiku

Honeysuckle vines Golden nectar from blooms tip Honey for your lips

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2012 5:18:00 PM

I like the way the first and last lines compliment each other. Congrats on your win (belatedly)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/16/2012 2:01:00 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Debra. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/14/2012 12:07:00 AM

Congratulation my friend on your win in the contest for this lovely haiku, enjoyed, bl

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/13/2012 2:05:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Debra! Love, annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/13/2012 9:38:00 AM

CONGRATS DEBRA ON A FANTASTIC WIN..

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/13/2012 6:16:00 AM

Thank you all for your lovely comments....and thanks to DP for my honorable mention in her contest. I rather like this form of poetry...nature compacted into a few words.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/13/2012 2:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debra x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/12/2012 9:37:00 PM

Debra... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/10/2012 5:06:00 PM

Sweet poem! I enjoyed it! Are you using a little personification here? Peace & Love Mathew Anish

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2012 11:10:00 AM

An excellent haiku on Valentine Deb.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2012 7:53:00 AM

i don't know what makes me want to dance while reading this.. and breathtaking too, debby... i like the honey dione two ways!... :) huggs!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 1/10/2012 7:33:00 AM

I like that this poem has 2 meanings :) and i like both of them, even if that was not your intention. great imagery. good luck in the contest!

Cory Long

Date: 1/10/2012 7:12:00 AM

this was very good.. thank you for all your comments. I have added you as a favorite poet :) hope you had a wonderful holiday. Cory

David Williams

Date: 1/10/2012 6:37:00 AM

knockout Debs, Valentine's day is rushing fast, enjoyed..David

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/9/2012 5:50:00 PM

That is so sweet- no pun intended lol : ) I loved honeysuckle when I was a kid I used to suck them.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/9/2012 4:21:00 PM

hey this is a really cool Haiku, Debra! Ilike it lots. very well done and imaginative. f this is for contest, it will be right up there.

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/9/2012 12:54:00 PM

Happy New Year to you , Debra! I love your your Valentine Haiku...it shows imagination and passion. If this is for the contest...I wish you good luck. Thanks for your kind comments. Love, Andrew.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2012 12:47:00 PM

Yes, it is fun enjoying that treat..I bet slugs like that also..Ha!Ha!..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Debra Squyres
Date: 1/9/2012 4:00:00 PM

Ha !! Them there slugs better stay away from my honeysuckle vines lol Keep them over there on your page lol

Suzanne C. Goudreau

Date: 1/9/2012 10:07:00 AM

Wow, I could just about taste that honey. Lovely imagery and perfectly delivered. Million thx for sharing!

Lord R. E. Taylor

Date: 1/9/2012 12:28:00 AM

It is a beautiful piece and a beautiful. Could you send some of the nectar my way???

Milton Toran

Date: 1/8/2012 8:45:00 PM

A nicely written haiku. Perfect 5-7-5 syllable count. Oh that's right! Valentine's Day ain't too far off! Time's really flying!...Milt

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/8/2012 7:23:00 PM

sounds perfectly sweet Debra .. good luck .. saw your blog comment for Tracie.. am waiting to hear from my friend if he wants to enter with me ..if not will be happy to partner with u luv .. should know soon ..

Debra Squyres
Date: 1/8/2012 8:22:00 PM

Just let me know via soup mail...

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/8/2012 5:09:00 PM

lovely Haiku Debra, best wishes Elizabeth

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/8/2012 4:59:00 PM

As cold as it has been around here lately, I can use all the reminders of summer I can get. This haiku reminds me of a typical day in June.

Debra Squyres
Date: 1/8/2012 8:25:00 PM

I have so many fond memories of spending warm days stripping the blooms form the honeysuckle vines...a childhood memory.

John Aaron Green

Date: 1/8/2012 3:56:00 PM

great to see you again,,are you still on the other sight,,this is wonderful,,and thanks so much for your kind comments...

Debra Squyres
Date: 1/8/2012 4:49:00 PM

This is the only website I'm posting my scribbles on now. I do share some on a facebook page with other poets also from time to time. Glad to see you are doing well here with your uplifting poetry !!