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A nick across the bedroom Door My eager Love bawled out "Score!" I told Him :"My Baby.. Not this jiffy today 'Cause no sir,No more white on this floor"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/20/2009 6:10:00 AM
Interesting writing here leaves me wondering. Thanks for your comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 7/20/2009 9:50:00 PM
nice! and yes my last name is really Loveless... and thank you for the amazing comments!!
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Date: 6/23/2009 4:10:00 AM
Clever Clever Nice Write
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Date: 6/21/2009 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for your comments on my poems, Sajdah. Good luck!
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Date: 6/20/2009 1:28:00 PM
What a witty limerick, Sajdah! Great form and a delightful read. Love, Carolyn
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