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Moon's calming sands are migrating. Sliding transitions that are captivating. Polls in the north and south are vibrating. The Universe's powerful spin chanting. The magnetic pools are of gravity reflecting. Torus-like helices with profound gyrating. Souls that are intertwined and floating. Paused under your breath, yet still doting. Twilight sky is beckoning me to claim flight. My body can't fly, but my spirit can be bright. I stirred the pot of boiling beans of blight As nothing ever went as planned, I sighed. Waged with the spoon, and tasted a bite. Laughing then laid a kiss on my head site. We often find time to be a frozen light. Where words are as warm as wool knit.
Written: December 11, 2022

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Date: 12/12/2022 6:55:00 AM
A well-crafted Monorhyme that masterfully expresses universal beauty, my friend, Lasaad! Be blessed!
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Date: 12/12/2022 2:49:00 AM
Creative lines penned in monorhyme. I am sure not so easy to write. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/11/2022 8:57:00 PM
Enjoyed this mono rhyming verse, especially the first part ! Ingenious composition !
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Date: 12/11/2022 11:03:00 AM
nice use of metaphors, my poetic friend! Really nice!!
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Date: 12/11/2022 9:14:00 AM
Skillfully and eloquently created my good friend Lasaad - you knit and crochet your words and phrases into imagery second to none. so WELL PENNED, BRAVO! May your festive season be merry and jolly and safe - hugs and blessings from across the pond, Jennifer
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