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Tit For Tat

An old man walked into town at noon, And met a fat-looking dangerous goon. “Give me all your money”, the goon said, brisk, “Or else your life’s at a very high risk". The old man put on a very frightened look, Took out his wallet, and gave it to the crook. The thug then exclaimed, “I took you in for fun", "I hadn’t any bullets - empty was my gun". To that, the man said, "Yours isn’t any worse." Mabye you should take a look inside my purse".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/27/2016 11:15:00 PM
Hi Sneha, Congrats on your fine couplet win. LINDA
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Date: 4/15/2016 9:18:00 AM
Sneha, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest...:)-luloo
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Date: 4/30/2015 6:55:00 PM
SNEHA. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:30:00 PM
Sneha, Congratulations on your Humorous Poetry contest win :) LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:38:00 AM
A fine work of humor. Congratulations to your WIN Sneha!!! ^_^
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Date: 4/22/2015 9:24:00 PM
Congrats on a very fine win..
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Date: 4/22/2015 2:03:00 PM
Got a chuckle about this winning work..Congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:55:00 PM
I love this humorous write, :) a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings eve
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:48:00 PM
Well done....Seren
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Date: 4/22/2015 1:04:00 PM
lol! funny! Congrats! :)
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Date: 4/22/2015 10:23:00 AM
Ha Ha, Sneha! Love it! Huge congratulations to you on your outstanding win! Sandra
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Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2015 10:30:00 AM
:D Thank you! So glad you liked it!
Date: 4/22/2015 8:43:00 AM
clever and funny! congrats on your win...
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Date: 4/22/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thank you! :D :D
Date: 4/22/2015 8:38:00 AM
I like it Sneha, thanks for the chuckle.
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Sneha Rv
Date: 4/22/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thank you! :D :D
Date: 4/22/2015 7:36:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Sneha- maybe you can give me some tips on wiriting humour - i got an N/A lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/22/2015 7:48:00 AM
If I don't laugh at myself I will cry Sneha - guess i need to wise up, pick myself up from the gutter, put plaster on my scraped knees and ego and crawl back up lol - least I can still smile! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Jan!! N/A's don't matter - Your poem actually had to win!!! It was a fabulous idea!!
Date: 2/14/2015 1:57:00 AM
Haha!! Tit for tat indeed. Nice poem Sneha. :)
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Date: 6/16/2014 10:51:00 AM
Hi , Sneha congratulations on a well-deserved win! I enjoyed this very witty write. Well done!
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Date: 6/16/2014 9:42:00 AM
Cute! Congratulations.
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Date: 6/16/2014 5:19:00 AM
Thanks for participating in the contest and congrats on a fine win, Sneha
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Date: 6/13/2014 9:45:00 PM
Well done to the theme Sneha. I am enjoying my visit. Verlena
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:10:00 AM
very funny poem
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Date: 5/21/2014 4:24:00 AM
Nice
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Date: 5/21/2014 4:18:00 AM
- A nice poem Sneha - Luck in contest, hope you win !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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