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Tiny White Pearls

Out in the freezing rain Hesitates gray morning Between winter's end and Spring's early intentions. Leafless barren trees Lining up on my street Glitter sluggishly Tiny frozen droplets Hanging from twigs and stems Resembling white gems. Until young golden rays Reflect in puddles, Exposing to my view Growth of green buds Emerging from nodes Where moments before I saw tiny white pearls. March 1, 2019 Placed first: March 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/16/2020 2:35:00 PM

A wonderful poem, Vijay. I'm already looking forward to Spring ;)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/30/2019 7:11:00 AM

Wonderful poem, Vijay:-) Congratulations on a fine win!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 6/29/2019 8:11:00 PM

Wow VIJay this was so visual took me right to the place! Congrats on your placement my dear !;)

John Hamilton

Date: 6/29/2019 7:52:00 PM

Wonderful write Vijay, enjoyed so much, congrats on a fine win!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/29/2019 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations! Such a beauty reflecting awesome Mother Nature as she transitions from Winter to Spring - simply awesome! A fav for sure! Hugs. Pandita

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 3/30/2019 12:27:00 PM

Beautiful, Vijay. Tiny white pearls, a lovely thought. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2019 4:22:00 PM

Thank you Sandra.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/29/2019 2:06:00 PM

Hello Vijiay Pandit, this is a lovely tribute for Spring. Hsve a nice day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Darlene.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/27/2019 9:44:00 AM

Congratulations for climbing the new best poem list :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/30/2019 4:21:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/14/2019 12:20:00 PM

Beautifully expressed my friend. Wonderful imagery/ I could see the leafless branches covered with ice crystals. That's the way they are in my yard right now. Great job. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2019 9:19:00 AM

Amazing how lovely they look on trees..thank you Judy..much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/10/2019 1:06:00 PM

Oh Vijay: I love this...so well expressed and similar in theme to my latest post. Adding it to my FAV’s to enjoy again and again. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/26/2019 9:17:00 AM

Many thanks for the FAVE SuZ..appreciate as always.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 3/9/2019 4:24:00 AM

A beautiful nature poem Like it

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Akham.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/8/2019 12:50:00 PM

Love this poem Vijay - it is a breathtaking experience to watch winter dissolving from little white pearls or gems to tiny green buds and twigs which slowly transform from dry lonely souls to twigs with blossoms of hope. Congratulations on your win Vijay - you are a poet with a beautiful heart! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2019 3:00:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer..you are so very kind.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/5/2019 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your thoughts always touch the sky. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:26:00 PM

Thank you Brandy.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/5/2019 9:34:00 AM

Congratulations for your win with this great poem Vijay. Have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:25:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/4/2019 5:30:00 PM

For me, rain conjures an entirely different world, a world with diamond dew drops and crystal prisms that become glorified by nature's pristine beauty. Your poem gave me that fresh feeling Vinay. This is so lovely! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2019 5:25:00 PM

So glad to hear..much appreciate, Connie..many thanks.