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TINKLE CHRISTMAS SPIRIT, TINKLE Bosom of palpitating air: air blowing crisp and cold cold amidst sweet greetings of care: care that never grows old! Old Christmas bells, Tinkle! Tinkle! Tinkles sound cheers and joys; joy invites peace. Hence, love twinkles. Twinkling touch, we'll employ... Employed presents under the tree, tree dressed in balls and lights. Lights agreeing to dance: carefree freely dazzling all night! Night persons away from their homes: homes where their hearts belong, to belong whereever they roam. Roam but not a lifelong... Let long uttered prayers and roars be roars of unity. Unity to clear clouds of war wars ending cruelty! ________________________________________________ 10:00 pm, December 10, 2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2016 12:13:00 AM

Olive, Nice win... ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 1/2/2016 1:09:00 AM

OLIVE, Congratulations on your "Chain Verse 1 WIN". SKAT

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/1/2016 9:56:00 PM

Olive, thank you for participating, good job and congrats on your third place!

James Fraser

Date: 12/16/2015 12:49:00 PM

Lovely clever Quatrain little one oozing warmth and a desire to have a loving existance for everyone. Wouldn't that be wonderful, for the World so needs it presently ~~ hugs//James ~~xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2015 3:50:00 PM

you did a wonderful job with this form. I have one of these types of poems waiting in the wings!! it took me forever to do. You too?? Good luck in the contest.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/17/2015 6:39:00 AM

Andie, this poem is one of the poem that I was really thinking twice of finishing because am having a hard time.. =`) hehehe but i like it anyway.. though I wasn't satisfied how it sound as I read out loud anyhow, I know I extend the message much.. =`) hugs!

James Inman

Date: 12/15/2015 10:04:00 AM

Nice Christmas wish, Olive.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/16/2015 8:28:00 PM

Thanks much James, I guess this what we always want right.. =`)~Olive Eloisa =`)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/13/2015 12:17:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully done. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/16/2015 6:44:00 AM

Thanks much Ravi but like what I mentioned its not one of my best..

Paul Callus

Date: 12/12/2015 6:36:00 AM

If people all over the world were to follow in your footsteps, there would be peace and love instead of hate and war. May the spirit of Christmas change the hearts of those who need a fresh outlook on life. Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/16/2015 6:42:00 AM

I always pray to the same Spirit touch each and everyone of us PAul.. =`) Thanks much, hugs~Olive Eloisa =`)

Emile Pinet

Date: 12/11/2015 9:57:00 AM

The imagery is well suited for the ambiance that the author has created throughout this piece, one of joyous celebration and Christmas cheer then trailing off to feelings of disappointment and despair..Emile.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/14/2015 4:54:00 AM

Emile, thank you so much for your generous remark and encouragement.. =`) In this write I want to present two sides of the world during Christmas, the happy atmosphere Christmas brings but still there is the unfinished war happening somewhere, which has been the prayers years ago.. peace. God bless you..