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For Silent One's 2024 Poem Not For Contest Poetry Contest

Muscatine is half an hour south of Davenport (and Davenport is one of the famous quad cities, two of them being across the river from the other two)

 

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“And I remember Muscatine -still more pleasantly - for its summer sunset. I have never seen any on either side of the ocean that equaled them.” Samuel Clemens in his younger years when he worked for Muscatine Journal and before he took the pen name, Mark Twain A sentimental feeling comes over me when I ponder my youth, growing up in the small city of Muscatine, Iowa. Iowa – where rainbows arch over verdant fields of swaying stalks of corn, painting their pretty pastels in blue summer skies. Iowa – where many rolling hills and where bluffs break the monotony of the lengthy flat terrain of Iowa’s surrounding sister states. Iowa – the only state where two long rivers run along the opposite sides of it. I grew up on the eastern side, seeing the great Mississippi nearly daily as it rolled its way down to New Orleans – that same southern city where my hero, a young Abraham Lincoln, got his first view of the cruelty of slavery, seeing Africans ripped from loved ones and sold at auction. Iowa - of whose heritage I am proud, for their underground railroad helped bring slaves farther north to freedom in either Minnesota or in Canada. Iowa - whose flag with broad vertical stripes of symbolic red, white and blue displays the slogan “Our liberties we prize and our rights we will maintain.” Iowa – where lunch is called dinner and dinner is called supper, and whose bounties are plentiful at Thanksgiving time and where hogs and cattle are the creatures that predominate the beautiful rural landscape. Even prouder am I of having grown up in Muscatine City, where the old bridge was exploded in the year of my graduation to make way for the new bridge, beautifully lit up at night, which crosses over into Illinois. Muscatine, named by the ancient Indians whose bodies lie buried in mounds across the state and also in a large park of my city where we frolicked in summer and where in winter, we ice skated on its large frozen pond. I changed my destiny when I moved west for college. Although I enjoy my valley home flanked by a range of mountains, I would still prefer to look upon a Muscatine sunset and see fireflies begin to flicker around me as twilight deepens into night; to smell the scent of lilac; to savor the juiciest of all watermelons that I ever tasted in my life; and to feel myself again in rhythm with the flow of the mighty Mississippi.

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Date: 1/20/2024 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go, lady. A very interesting youth you must have had. Thanks for sharing a part of you and history with us. Sara K
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:59:00 AM
We do grow with the richness of our memories.. so wonderful where you have taken us dear Andrea! Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! So much pleased reading you. Best regards.
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:53:00 AM
Delightful musings Andrea. So peaceful a picture. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 1/10/2024 11:18:00 AM
Did ya know they built a baseball field in the middle of crops in Iowa?? Thats from one my favourite film, Field of dreams... Loved this poem, one of your best... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:57:00 AM
Fascinating how we view where we grew up. It's a very loving and heart-felt description of a great place!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/7/2024 11:17:00 PM
I know people that just want to escape their small towns, but I just really like the vibe of Iowa. A laid back sweet place to be. Utah, however, has many beautiful sights to see as well. I got used to its dry heat. I sure hated sweating in those humid days of Iowa summers.
Date: 1/7/2024 12:22:00 AM
again, the bucolic! Two things vooman....1) Betsy truly made the flag here in pa...2) Mississippi (last state to do so) did rid slavery in 2013....so they claim.great write dear poet....much love, me
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/7/2024 7:51:00 AM
Does anyone use the term supper where you live? I doubt many even in the US use dinner in place of lunch.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/7/2024 7:50:00 AM
Iowa's stripes are vertical but they are just three wide stripes taking up the whole flag. I think I should put it in my picture window! I hope you are kidding about Mississippi. hahaha. 2013. So funny.
Date: 1/5/2024 11:41:00 PM
This is so interesting and insightful, while also youve given us a clear idea of Iowa etc you’ve also written in a very descriptive manner painting imagery so beautifully. I love the part about lunch being called dinner and dinner as supper. That was interesting and different for me as iv never heard of that. I love your mention of abraham lincoln and the rest that follows with that. Profound poem for silent ones contest: pleasure reading your work always. Best wishes
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Ink Empress
Date: 1/6/2024 9:23:00 PM
Ahh thats really very intetesting. I think i heard about supper from one of my friends but dinner part truly was new. I loved this sweet andrea
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2024 11:01:00 AM
I got something backwards. I used to pronounce wash as wosh. We lived near Missouri so maybe it is Missouri thing. Since Iowa is farmer state, they eat their biggest meal dinner at lunchtime for energy while sup is to eat lightly. It is funny that most Iowans are not farmers any more so we actually have large meals at night like everyone else.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2024 9:20:00 AM
Thanks, ink. People in the states put Iowa down as a hick place, but the literacy rate is one of the highest in the nation, and political nominations are important there. Also I don't know if they still do the dinner/supper thing, but when I got to college, people thought I was crazy asking about dinner when it was lunch time. The one thing I changed with my punctuation was pronouncing "wosh" as "wash" It's a strange peculiarity to say wosh. Other than that, Iowans are said to be the standard of American pronunciation.
Date: 1/5/2024 10:35:00 PM
You take the reader on a amazing journey of your childhood home Andrea. It sounds a beautiful place without a doubt. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2024 11:01:00 AM
Thanks, Tom
Date: 1/5/2024 8:16:00 PM
Okay, now I want to move to Iowa, well at least visit it (lol) A wonderful description that's filled with the history of Muscatine and Iowa. Very nicely done, Andrea. Best wishes in SO's contest. Happy New Year, dear friend. Charlie
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2024 11:03:00 AM
Just take the back roads if you go. Driving straight through on the interstate is almost as boring as driving through Nebraska
Date: 1/5/2024 5:36:00 PM
Andrea Your poem is a wonderful, beautiful and evocative piece that celebrates the beauty and heritage of Iowa. The vivid imagery and clever wordplay make it a joy to read. I especially love the line “Iowa - whose flag with broad vertical stripes of symbolic red, white and blue displays the slogan ‘Our liberties we prize and our rights we will maintain.’” May 2024 be an inspiring year for poetry. - Blessings, Daniel
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2024 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Daniel
Date: 1/5/2024 4:12:00 PM
Awww what a sweetly reminiscing piece. But Iowa? Okay, it must have it's charms. I grew up in a small village too, where small minded people live. No desire to return. Great poem
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/6/2024 1:35:00 PM
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2024 11:04:00 AM
Where was that?
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Charles Messina
Date: 1/5/2024 8:18:00 PM
lol..I grew up in a town called Iselin, where all the Iselinerds come from.

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