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This Week's Epitaph

A child of God, Dane Smith-Johnsen, From dawn to dusk, no longer diets. She finally lost weight – By returning to dust in the end. © November 14, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2010 4:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/25/2010 8:57:00 AM

Congrats Dane Ann on your big win in Andrea's cool contest with this awesome epitaph.. great words .. so wonderful ... enjoy with luv..

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/25/2010 8:44:00 AM

This was very clever, Dane Ann! Congratulations on your winning epitaph!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/25/2010 6:49:00 AM

Congrats on your win Dane Ann in the contest. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2010 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations, Dane Ann. Just think, at some point you won't have to diet anymore. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/25/2010 5:22:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deservedn win , Dane

Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/25/2010 5:07:00 AM

Congrats, Dane Ann.Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/25/2010 1:50:00 AM

Dane, congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest ;) Wilma

Thvia Shetley

Date: 10/24/2010 10:57:00 PM

congrats on the contest, well done!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/24/2010 9:40:00 PM

oh my my-- I just read Andrea's comment below-- Andrea I think that was the end-date for your contest??? not THE date -- heaven forbid please!! -- oops sorry Dane-- congrats on your win in Andrea's contest :) this sure was a witty epitaph :) -- nikko :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2010 9:25:00 PM

ooh, yikes, I just noticed that date there. Hope it's not something prophetic and related to your epitaph!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/24/2010 9:23:00 PM

I just really liked this one a lot, Dane Ann. It reminds me of what I'll feel when I die and don't have to worry about stupid weight gain anymore. Congratulations on your win in my contest. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/24/2010 9:15:00 PM

thats about the only diet that is going to work for me too I think, congrats on your win in the contest Dane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/20/2010 9:21:00 PM

That's hysterical, Dane Ann! It was nice talking to you last weekend. Wish you had time to stop by the Soup more often, but I know you're busy. Please offer some prayers for my high school friend Barbara. She had her sixth spinal surgery today. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 2:58:00 AM

Blessing Dane. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/14/2010 10:09:00 AM

awww PIXIE DUST!!!! Glad you're home! Please leave me a blog comment. We'll talk soon! Love's Ya