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The Twelfth of Never

The twelfth of never, how very clever. That is a very long time, to listen to a wind chime. Date Written: 11/13/2020 The Twelfth of Never Pick-A-Title, Vol 25 - Rhyme 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 11/21/2020 9:43:00 AM
Quite a funny take on this contest. Best for a win. ~~
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2020 11:27:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like it. Guess I was in a funny mood that day. Have a great weekend.....................
Date: 11/21/2020 8:17:00 AM
love this one...short but paints the picture wonderfully... my son's neighbor has several wind chimes, when i go over to walk his dogs i love standing there and listening to them... hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2020 8:26:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. So glad you like this write. I have missed hearing from you. Hope you are OK. I love wind chimes and the different sounds they make. Have a great weekend with hugs...................
Date: 11/17/2020 9:45:00 AM
A fun, witty clever short write - bet you had fun with it, but very astute of you to think like this. Well penned Paula. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2020 7:52:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like it. it was a fun write. Enjoy your weekend with hugs and blessings...............
Date: 11/16/2020 4:59:00 PM
Good poem, Paula. I liked the first line, especially.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2020 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, for reading and writing. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your weekend............
Date: 11/15/2020 5:24:00 PM
Ha, ha! I haven't viewed the picture for the contest, Paula, but this sure is charming the 'bejeebers' out of me! Peace, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/16/2020 1:18:00 PM
Thanks, writing. Glad you like this one. it was a fun write. Enjoy your day..............
Date: 11/15/2020 4:36:00 PM
love this one so short and smart. So were we to do only one stanza? I need to soupmail the judge on that.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/16/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thanks, for writing. Glad you like it. I hope I did this right. Have a wonderful day...............
Date: 11/14/2020 6:41:00 PM
Clever poetry Paula, love it.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2020 7:28:00 AM
Thanks, for reading and writing. Glad you like this one. Enjoy your day............
Date: 11/13/2020 6:54:00 PM
Ah Paula, I can listen to a wind chime for ever on forever, I love the sound of them, very witty entry. Good luck in the contest,
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thanks, for writing and for your good luck. I love wind chimes. I have a few of them. Enjoy your day............
Date: 11/13/2020 6:49:00 PM
Lovely rendition dear Paula..Goodluck.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2020 7:25:00 AM
Thanks, for reading, writing and for your good luck. Enjoy your day.........................
Date: 11/13/2020 4:17:00 PM
I can hear it too now. Good luck in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/15/2020 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, for writing and for your good luck. Enjoy your day.........................

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