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The Tub of Love

This tub is filled with different words that float in my life Most are still here because of my sweet loving wife She takes such good care of me every single day That is the reason these words never float away Without her I would flow right down the drain And all that would do is cause more pain So I keep it filled that's my usual plan Also jump into it whenever I can Always bathing myself in love Hoping that she will never P the P U L L U L G

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/28/2012 2:58:00 AM
Dan..this is awesome...great work :)) Sk
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Date: 9/21/2012 5:07:00 PM
awesome,,,, then cute at the end,,,, you have a blessed day Dan ;}
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Date: 8/24/2012 9:03:00 PM
I have a feeling she's a long suffering soul whose life is never dull. Can it be true? That's quite a tub you built there, hope the legs don't give out!
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Date: 8/23/2012 8:49:00 PM
You chose a unique theme and it worked brilliantly, I am sure she wont be pulling any plugs so enjoy your bath Dan.. Congratulations on your win ;) tc Wilma
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Date: 8/21/2012 3:01:00 PM
Very creative poem. Love everything about it! :) wHO CAN PULL THE PLUG ON YOU! You are too awesome and sweet. :) Always, Laura
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Date: 8/4/2012 7:32:00 PM
This is awesome! Bathe in love....priceless words. Hugs
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:17:00 AM
Very clever! congrats on your win! love the ending :)
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Date: 8/1/2012 6:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Craig's "Concrete/Shape" contest Dan. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:31:00 PM
HA...LOVE IT.... CONGRATULATIONS... WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN..XOXOXOX~PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:05:00 PM
dan, you are beyond awesome!.. this has both creative substance and imaginative shape...congrats!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:50:00 PM
Glad to see this in the winner's circle! Congrats on your win, Dan! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/29/2012 2:38:00 PM
Dan, Congrats on your wonderful win! I love the sentimental write and perfect shape to go with it. Very creative! I'm sure your wife loved it. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations Suzette great shape and verse wouls have placed it higher xx
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:07:00 PM
Creative idea..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/29/2012 12:16:00 PM
Dan congrats on yoru win, great dedication..david
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Date: 7/26/2012 4:06:00 PM
Dan, I have to leave where I am now at this computer and just wanted to say thanks for all your sweet comments though I see no current poem from you to respond to. I am back at this one about the tub because I think you did such a cool job with it. SUre hope it wins in the contest. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:38:00 AM
Excellent, excellent, excellent my friend!!! Great to be back here from my vacation...love this piece here!!!! Wow!
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Date: 7/23/2012 8:54:00 PM
Terrific job for a shape poem. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/22/2012 2:53:00 AM
Hi there Dan! WEll, it's about time you write something CLEAN!!! ha ha ha ah ah....or rather, It's about time u take a bath! ha ha h aha ...this is the nicest shape poem and it flows lovely...hope your wife loves it as much as all your poet friends...sweet rhymes! Enjoyed the humor and metaphor to real life. gwendolen ps...no rubber ducky?...awww!
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Date: 7/21/2012 4:54:00 PM
AWESOME cleverness. Kind of metaphorical too. I love yours.
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Date: 7/21/2012 3:55:00 PM
Super poem... super structure... Terry
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Date: 7/21/2012 7:50:00 AM
This is great, Dan. A wonderful tribute to your wife and a clever shape. I love the way you formed the legs of the tub with the ending words. Love, Kim
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Dan Kearley
Date: 7/21/2012 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Kim...I was hoping someone would enjoy it? :o)
Date: 7/21/2012 4:56:00 AM
You have a sweet lovely wife Dan....takes such good care of you and love you.- Hope she like this poem to. - - Very well written poem - oxox f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
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Dan Kearley
Date: 7/21/2012 11:43:00 AM
She said Awwwww... And gave me a smile. :o) So I guess that's a yes? Thank you,my f.e.f oxox :o)
Date: 7/21/2012 2:45:00 AM
Great just great once again i loved your write, beautiful for your wife, oh how i love love!!!
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Dan Kearley
Date: 7/21/2012 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Kerry...It nice to meet another person who Loves...LOVE! :o)

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