The Stars

The ***** burns bright **** set afire A *** the universe is **** and ***** holes ****** from beyond In the ***** of the abscess we *** all within **** minds ah *** ** *** *** *** ****** **** ***** God ***** ***** ** *** **** ***** **** in the ********* **** ***** Then Twilight becomes **** and ***** *** ******** **** explodes in ****** **** then *** ****** winds

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/1/2018 5:16:00 PM

got to give this five ***** lol, open to so much interpretation lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 9/29/2018 3:56:00 PM

Very creative, Arthur. You test our intelligence! Let me have a go at the first part: "The flame burns bright, soul set afire//Afar the universe is vast and dense holes appear from beyond.// ... will give the next visitor a chance to carry on:) Regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/29/2018 8:30:00 AM

I continue to learn from your talented pen, my friend! You are indeed a poet extraordinaire! Such profound words and artistry - wonderful as always! Love and hugs. Pandita

Tim Smith

Date: 9/29/2018 7:23:00 AM

The diner burns bright food set afire A day the universe is dark and black holes emerge from beyond In the tooth of the abscess we are all within weak minds ah man or men can eat thirty more beans God helps those in the John shorts fill in the sanctuary down below Then Twilight becomes loud and farts and releases crap explodes in neither pond then all vision winds

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/29/2018 12:25:00 AM

* **** ** ***** *** ******* *** **** *** ********** ** ***** ** ********* ****-*** **

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/28/2018 4:34:00 PM

yeowww, arthur... now, i have to fill in the blanks... star-struck!...huggs

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/28/2018 6:25:00 AM

***** (5 star review)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/28/2018 3:37:00 AM

The typing of a poem has never seemed this profound before to my eyes; this is an excellent idea. Thank you for executing it, and teaching me! It all makes sense, and it seems to help the twilight explode into the wind.....

Darren White

Date: 9/28/2018 1:41:00 AM

Art V****o, you're such **** dope :D

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2018 3:39:00 AM

LOL you forgot a star! LOL is stupid dope!!!