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The Slow Toothless Mole

In one labor of Star-nosed Moles Traveled a slower toothless cow The last in line, all that she sees Is sore gums and molasses now!

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/14/2019 9:05:00 PM

G'day PAT … I suppose could go to McDonalds and be adored in a bread roll by every customer - thanks PAT - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 11/15/2019 2:38:00 PM

Well... I guess Mole Bread Roll does kind of have a ring to it. But since it's just the rear end, I'm afraid it wouldn't taste real great!.............80)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2019 4:47:00 PM

your imaginative poems do make me smile Pat!:-) hugs jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 11/15/2019 2:36:00 PM

Thanks Jan. Molasses is a word begging to be played with I think! Thanks for commenting!......pat