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The Rabbits

Three Rabbits gather Below the driveway they sit and ponder When to go inside To search for their food Three patches of plants They eye the bushes Two rabbits enjoying Eating the new plants They run off to hide Until the next day All the plants were new The bushes were new Now both plants and bushes Look crooked and thin They are ruined By the three rabbits

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/24/2024 8:48:00 AM

Wow, so descriptive! I like this one.pangie romios.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2024 9:28:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, oh, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/ xxx

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/1/2024 1:14:00 PM

Well I wondered why my plants were suffering? Its 'your dang rabbits' they must have hopped Through my screen, like a bad dream.? Herbivores no more ' I am going to fence them Off.'

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/1/2024 3:59:00 PM

Hello Joe, Oh, good luck with that. They will find a waqy to get at the plants. They always do. Ha! Nice to ss you. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/14/2023 6:54:00 PM

A new version of the 'Three R's' I learned in school, eh? Thanks, Darlene! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/15/2023 3:31:00 PM

Hello Gershon, these were the 3R,s? Oh! Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 10/27/2023 5:28:00 PM

Listen Darlene, the three rabbits worth more than the bushes and the plants. This is what they do. Do you know? I laugh with this poem. It's so wonderful and believe me, it makes me laugh, because the rabbits just are rabbits and do their life, even if they ruin the plants. Beautiful. Love María

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/28/2023 7:58:00 AM

Hello Maria, Yes rabbits are just rabbits and they eat plants. I look at this situation as they have to eat. The plants can grow back. Love, ,\Darlene/

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/22/2023 8:28:00 AM

A cute poem up to a point. You can't let rabbits run about free if you wish to preserve the plants. I remember on the border of Austria, there were so many wild rabbits. The inhabitants tried to destroy them but no use. They breed so quickly. And ate quickly too. Blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/28/2023 7:59:00 AM

Enjoy your weekend. My friend. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/22/2023 11:17:00 AM

Hello Victor, Victor these are wild rabbits. So true pants will be eaten by rabbits. It is their food. Yes they do breed quickly and eat quickly. After all it food for the rabbits. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Mulu Magdalinos

Date: 10/21/2023 5:56:00 AM

Hello Darlene, a beautiful narrative poem,have a blessed weekend!!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/21/2023 6:13:00 AM

Hello Mulu, Thank you Mulu. Enjoy your weekend. Have a blessed weekend. /Darlene\

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/20/2023 8:36:00 PM

Darlene I love rabbits we also have opossums here that come on my deck at night along with feral.cats Animals have to eat, they eat flowers, vegetables too Well, they can’t go to grocery store)). We might ot like it, butt it’s up tou. Yo figure out a wat to save bushes. Plant plastic o RX?? Hah ha Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/21/2023 6:17:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I did se a possum sitting on a fence in the summer. It was enjoying the heat. I see it as feeding the rabbits. Flowers can always grow. Hugs /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/20/2023 1:31:00 PM

A cuter/fun/true write. Rabbits will eat up plants/bushes/garden. They are so cute to watch. Have a fun weekend.............

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2023 3:49:00 PM

Hello Paula, Yes the rabbits are cute ti watch. the babies are cute. Thank you. You enjoy your weekend. Hugs. /Darlene/

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/20/2023 7:07:00 AM

I have seen the scene you describe my friend. And now your poem brings it to fore--nicely done, Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2023 10:13:00 AM

Hello Vijay, So nice to see you. I have also seen this scene. Thank you for the lovely comment. My friend. Enjoy your day./Darlene/

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/19/2023 8:51:00 PM

Darlene, hi. I lived in Nj/NY met area where we occasionally had deer, but i didn’t see avrabbit off the tv til i was 32 & had moved to KY, where i saw a clutch of three newborn in a fluffy nest under a backyard bush. After reading your delightful poem, i guess they ate away the bottom of the bush 8-) hugs,sally

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2023 4:29:00 AM

Hello Sally So good to see you back. I love the deer. They are beautiful creatures. Baby bunnies are so cute. They come into the yard at night. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs. /Darlene\

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/19/2023 3:18:00 PM

Hello Darlene :-) Very interesting read! I believe in natural Eco system (fix oneself by itself without human intervention). So we should not be worry about plants eaten by rabbits. Yet, your poem is very nice! Have a nice day lovely Darlene, with warmest wishes, ~AA

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/20/2023 4:32:00 AM

Hello Abdullah, I really do not mind when the bunnies eat some of the plants. It is part of nature for the bunnies to eat plants. After all they have to eat. Warmth wishes A.A. /Darlene/\

Silent One

Date: 10/19/2023 11:35:00 AM

Rabbits can run riot.. lovely poem.. Have a nice day Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2023 3:14:00 PM

Hello Silent One, Thank you silent One for the lovely comment. Yes the rabbits can run. thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend./Darlene\

Jan Allison

Date: 10/19/2023 11:12:00 AM

I used to have a rabbit as a pet, it was kept in a hutch for the reason you wrote about! There's nothing we can do about the wild ones though! hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2023 3:11:00 PM

Hello Jan, You are right. there is nothing we ca n do with the wild ones. The baby bunnies are cute. Hugs/. Darlene\

Jay Narain

Date: 10/19/2023 10:50:00 AM

Rabbits, and deer, they munch on green soft plants. Nice work.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/19/2023 3:08:00 PM

Hello Jay Narain, So nice to meet you. Thank you for letting me know. Thank you for the lovely comment. Rnjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\