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The Pool Player

A pool player taking a snooze Had a dream that his match he would lose. Since his bladder would squeeze He was minding his pees But he should have been minding his cues! for Andrea's "Show Me the Funny" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/18/2013 10:46:00 PM
I B., LOL, thanks for the smile... congrats! love ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/15/2013 9:45:00 AM
Ilene nice one. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/14/2013 5:42:00 PM
congratulations in the contest.... mighty funny... love LINDA
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:50:00 AM
You have fantastic wit...love the symbolic use of Pees and Cues... funnnnyyyy :) Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:18:00 AM
EXCELLENT write... LOL... Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/14/2013 2:43:00 AM
Well thought out, i loved it ...Seren
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Date: 7/13/2013 11:56:00 PM
aha, so you had it before in my limerick contest a long time ago.(just reading old comments on here) I did not even remember that. But I am glad you made another win with me in this contest. You were up against a lot of different forms and great humor and you did fantastic to be in my top ten. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/13/2013 9:03:00 PM
This is sooo cute!!!! Loved it !
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Date: 6/10/2012 7:16:00 AM
Yes ,very witty Limerick and nice thinking!Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:29:00 PM
Congrats, very funny...Tanya
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:26:00 PM
Should have rated at the top. Great limerick. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/9/2012 11:30:00 AM
Congrats, Ilene. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 6/9/2012 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Limerick" contest Ilene. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/9/2012 6:58:00 AM
ilene, congrats on your win..David
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Date: 6/9/2012 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine limerick xx
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Date: 6/9/2012 4:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Very funny... Terry
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Date: 6/9/2012 12:29:00 AM
Love the play on words in yours, Ilene. Big congrats in my limerick contest.
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:53:00 PM
Fantastic sense of humor!
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Date: 3/4/2012 10:13:00 AM
Was the guy's name "Wisconsin Skinny"? Good limerick Ilene.
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Date: 3/4/2012 9:38:00 AM
You are so funny, ilene and such a delight! love, Kathy
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Date: 3/2/2012 6:17:00 PM
Ilene,, fun limerick~have a nice one ;-)* PD
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:36:00 PM
Nicely done.....always a smile. - oxox love Anne-Lise - Have a lovely weekend Ilene.
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Date: 3/2/2012 11:03:00 AM
hahaha, you did a good one!!!
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:38:00 AM
soo funny and fascinating, ilene.. if for a contest, you have a winner... :) huggs to you! :)
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:12:00 AM
cleverly crafted Ilene and a fun read too.. good luck if for a contest on PS.. amazing visual luv..
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