Get Your Premium Membership

The Pink Evening Sky

The luminous winds of the sky are love-coated with passion. Passion hidden in solitude, concealed for eternity, under heaven's rules. The everlasting jubilation of freedom doesn't compare to our God-given air. The mid-lightened setting, of the days aftermath, which mesmerizes many-a-people weakened by the desperation of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/21/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Orlando in Rick's contest "The Pink Evening Sky". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/4/2011 12:50:00 PM
Hi Orlando - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Kory (KC)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2011 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2011 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations Orlando on your worthy poem's top ten place. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2011 7:49:00 AM
Wonderful comparison and so true. Many congrat’s , dear Orlando, on your big win, Elaine
Login to Reply
Date: 2/3/2011 1:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem, Orlando-- nikko :)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/2/2011 10:16:00 PM
Awesome poem, Orlando and a big congrats to you in the contest. LUv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 2/2/2011 3:24:00 PM
Many congrats on your fine win in Rick's contest Orlando....:)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/2/2011 1:03:00 PM
thank you for the comments and wonderful remarks on my poetry.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/2/2011 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Orlando
Login to Reply
Date: 2/2/2011 4:12:00 AM
Congrats Orlando on your big win in this contest!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
Login to Reply
Date: 2/1/2011 8:17:00 PM
Congrats Orlando on your wonderful win in the Pink Sky contest with this beautiful entry luv... enjoy your sweet success and top ten win with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2011 7:31:00 PM
Very nice poem...good luck in the contest...Jimmy
Login to Reply
Date: 1/27/2011 7:22:00 PM
This looks like a good entry for the new contest. One item: in your eighth line, "god-given" should be spelled with a capital G.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs