The Pear

The Pear When you look at me...I'm as a freshly bitten Doyenne Du Comice... 3.2.2017©deborah burch Monoku

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2017 7:06:00 AM

Doyenne Du Comice is a sweet, juicy pear, Deborah; who could avoid its temptation!:) #7 Hugs // paul

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/11/2017 9:30:00 AM

;) *blush*

Judy Ball

Date: 3/8/2017 4:28:00 PM

Who doesn't like a nice juicy pear. Well done Deb. God Bless, JB

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 4:53:00 PM

Bahahaha!! Judy you made me burst out laughing! Lol! Thank you so much! Hugggs:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2017 3:34:00 PM

Very interesting image it gives me!! sweet one liner.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 4:54:00 PM

Since we seem to be so much alike I can only imagine;) LOL!! Big Hugggs and thank you!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/8/2017 1:53:00 PM

A yummy monoku sweet Deborah :)

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 4:55:00 PM

Thank you Charmaine!! :) you are so kind!! Big Hugggs!!

Chris Green

Date: 3/8/2017 1:27:00 PM

Mmmm, what a delicious Monoku. :) Really nice Deb.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/8/2017 4:56:00 PM

Lol!! Thank you Chris!! I wasn't sure if it was perhaps too suggestive :0 Hugggs!!