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The Moon In June

the face of the first full moon shines, reflecting lush and fertile fields, where nature’s sweet abundance yields strawberries sprawling on trailing vines; for aromatic berry wines. Date: June 6, 2022 For: The Moon in June Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich Syllables verified on howmanysyllables.com Rhymes Rhyme scheme: a/b/b/a/a Rhymes verified on rhymezone.com Placed 2nd in contest

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/14/2022 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" Quintilla write. Have a blessed day with your win...........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/13/2022 9:24:00 AM

Oh Paulette! This is as lovely, and tranquil, as "sprawling" berry vines in the moonlight. A beautiful moonlit scene. Congratulations on your win. Blessings!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/13/2022 10:05:00 AM

Hi Sam, glad you enjoyed it.....June is the most delightful month with the Strawberry Moon appearing on the 14th and the vines lush with fruit. :)Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2022 11:38:00 PM

this is a wonderful quintella you created for my contest, Paulette. Congrats on your splendid win,

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/13/2022 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Andrea~I am honored to have taken the 2nd place ment but I assure you I will still try for a 1st! LOL. :)Paulette

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/9/2022 11:56:00 PM

A beautiful Quintilla for the moon in June Paulette and as for strawberry wine it sounds divine… Blessings, Belle

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/13/2022 7:35:00 AM

Thank you Belle~very sweet! :)Paulette

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/9/2022 12:14:00 PM

A lovely piece Paulette, such nice imagery and nice piece of brevity. Blessings always,Gordon

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 12:55:00 PM

Thank you Gordon~glad you enjoyed it. Blessings,Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/8/2022 9:22:00 AM

OOH I love the scent of that Paulette, I miss you last week, hope all is well, love and peace, Vie

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 7:05:00 AM

Hi Vie, Glad you enjoyed the “scent” of my poem~as you know I have a penchant for the moon….hence I love to write about it. XO P

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/8/2022 5:18:00 AM

Paulette, the spectacular beauty of nature shines brightly in your beautiful poem! A gem this is! Happy Wednesday xxoo

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/9/2022 7:03:00 AM

Hi Mike, thanks for stopping by to gaze at the wonders of the moon….glad you liked it. :)Paulette

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/7/2022 9:53:00 AM

Through your words delicate and divine, I can almost taste those delicious strawberries on the vine. You have captured the moment so beautifully, my dear friend. The Moon in June leaves me in complete awe, and your thoughts are breathtaking. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/7/2022 1:09:00 PM

Brandy, thank you so much, I am glad I was able to bring the reality of the “Moon in June” to you. Thank you stopping by to comment. :)Paulette

Bill Baker

Date: 6/6/2022 3:09:00 PM

Lovely entry for the contest, Paulette. Good luck! Bill

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/6/2022 4:34:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by once again, to comment on my poems. Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/6/2022 11:18:00 AM

What a unique poem, from start to finish., PauletteL ~ Panagiota~

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/6/2022 4:35:00 PM

Panagiota glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/6/2022 11:02:00 AM

Helllo Paulette, strawberry wine !I never had strawberry wine. Did you? Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2022 4:50:00 AM

Hello Paulette, yes i agree strawberry wine would be betterer on ice cream. Hugs. Enjoy your day.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/6/2022 4:36:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by to comment, Darlene~Strawberry wine is quite sweet, it is not a favorite of mine but it has a lovely aroma and I think it would be perfect drizzled over vanilla ice cream. :)Paulette

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2022 9:08:00 AM

Perfect in every sense. Best for a win. Yo deserve it.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/6/2022 9:25:00 AM

Thank you Victor. Hope you have a nice day. :)Paulette